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 | | Subject: rOAst mE (but only lightly toasted) Wed 7 Feb 2018 - 10:26 | |
| maybe not actually
but, i am always looking for constructive criticism and suggestions
lets make this a place for HELPFUL suggestions for character development and a kind space for growth
I'm looking for suggestions for any and all of my characters:
-Rippedsky
-Artemis
-Coyotefang
-Mumblepaw
things you like and dislike would be the bestest thing ever to foster growth and development. for now, this is just for my own characters.
however, if anyone wants to join in on this, you can choose to offer up your character for thoughts below
The one rule is... if you have a suggestion for improvement PLEASE also include one thing you like about said character that is already in place. I don't want to start hard feelings if anyone else decides to put themselves out there. I am personally okay with whatever you throw at me, but I cannot speak for others
ready, set, GO |
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Maple
Former Staff
Characters : *Dustcloud {D}, *Blazeflight {B}, *Silentstrike {Sil}, *Gustpuddle {G}, *Swiftflight {Sw}, *Fennelpaw {Fn}, *Jaysong {Ja}, *Fallowlight {Fa}, *Fern {Fe}, *Brackenberry {Br}, *Ivystar {Iv}, *Specklekit {Sp}, *Beanheart {Be}, *Freckleface {Fr}, Briarthorn {Br}, *Eris {E}, *Hyacinthia {Hy}, *Otterdance {Ot}, Nightbird {Ni}, *Olivepaw {Ol}, Smudgekit {Sm}
Clan/Rank : Tier Five SkyClan Warrior {Br}, Tier Two SkyClan Warrior {Ni}, WindClan Kit {Sm}
 
Number of posts : 4841
Gender : they/them or username :)
Age : 20
| | Subject: Re: rOAst mE (but only lightly toasted) Wed 7 Feb 2018 - 12:01 | |
| Artemis should become friends with Dustcloud, she could totally use a friend right now, maybe even a pep-talk~
I like what you've got going on with the Oasis and stuff, I'm really excited to see how he grows and develops over time! ______________________________________  ♛ Site Baby Sister ♛ | Briarthorn | Nightbird | Smudgepaw |
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Kent Mansley
Number of posts : 1273
| | Subject: Re: rOAst mE (but only lightly toasted) Wed 7 Feb 2018 - 14:02 | |
| All my characters are up, make sure my babs are not becoming the succ ______________________________________ |
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Stags
 
Number of posts : 1974
Gender : she/her || they/them || he/him
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: rOAst mE (but only lightly toasted) Wed 7 Feb 2018 - 17:53 | |
| Can I just make my own thread? ______________________________________ Astra inclinant... .: Coyotegrin :: Kestrelchirp :: Quailprowler : Waspswarm : Burnetpaw :.
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