A Tragedy #2 (closed for evryone in sunkits fun day)

She bounded behind the nursery and when she turned back Sunkit and Goldenkit were following her. She squeezed under the brambles and went to the fox hole.

Sunkit dashed after Cloverkit, and slid under the brambles. "Okay, where do we go now?" he asked quietly. When Goldenkit came up beside him, he pressed his flank against hers, remembering his promise to keep her safe.

"I can't see," Goldenkit cried, quietly. She smelled something. Alive. A fox? Maybe. But Goldenkit reconized the smell. There was only 2 things alive she remembered. A fluttery thing, and something much bigger. A badger. "A badger!" Goldenkit cried in full alarm, and sprinted out of the den, following the light. As she ran, she started sobbing. "MOTHER!" She wailed, sprinting back to camp. She then heard a low growl. The badger was coming.

Sunkit suppressed a laugh. "Goldenkit, it's a fox! Right, Cloverkit?" he added hopefully.

"I reconize it's scent... I think it's a badger in a fox den," Goldenkit mewled, having a tear drop out of her eye. "I don't wanna be attacked again... maybe I'll just go home." She had her head down, and she limped home. "And give me credit if it is a badger!" Goldenkit yeowled as she limped home.

Sunkit looked after her, dumbfounded. "It isn't a badger! Trust me." He looked at Cloverkit again. "It isn't, right?" he pleaded. "Remember, Goldenkit, I promised I'd protect you! You said you trusted me! Do you not trust me anymore?" He whimpered.

"Of course its a fox!" She yowled as it came up behind them. "RUN!!!!!!!!" She ran to camp and squeezed under the brambles and looked back to make sure Sunkit was following then ran and hid inside the nursery. "Phew luckily we didn't lead the fox into camp" She meowed in a low tone. "Lets go fine Goldenkit and tell her it was fine. I never should have brought you guys." Her tail trailed in the dust and she looked out at the sky as she poked her head out. "I'm gonna get some rest..." She padded over to her mother and tucked her nose over her tail over by the back of the nursery.
About an hour later a scratching noise on the other side of the brambles awoke her and she saw that Sunkit was awake to. "Oh hey your up to? Do you know whats breaking the bramle-" She shrieked as the foxes sharp teeth sank into her scruff. "SUNKIT HELP ME!!!!!!!" She kept shrieking and she fought to get lose from the foxes steely grasp. "Please let me go fox!!!!" She sobbed as it took her away.
She was in the corner of the new fox den huddled up because the fox had been driven out and forced to find a new one and it was in search for new food. She didn't leave because the fox had carried her deeper into unknown Thunderclan territory.

OOC: Are we gonna play this as kits or apprentices?

OOC: kits were like 5 moons old.

OOC: Okay.

ICC: Goldenkit hissed and ran to her Mother. "CLOVERKIT GOT TAKEN BY A FOX!" She yeowled, running to the clearing. Cloverkit, Cloverkit, Cloverkit, oh no. I hope Cloverkit's okay... Goldenkit thought.

OOC: Cloverpool, you double posted above. And, mods, I'm not mini-modding. I'm just telling him.

IC: Sunkit stared at the fox and Cloverkit. When his instincts reached him again, his friend was already gone with the fox. He bounded over to his mother. Though she was blind, she might be able to help. "Whitecloud!" he screeched. "Help! Goldenkit was taken by a fox!!"

OOC: It was Cloverkit, not Goldenkit LOL!

ICC: "It was Cloverkit, not me you mouse-brain." Goldenkit meowed. "If I was gone, you hadn't heard my warning." She loved teasing her siblings, especily when they made silly mistakes.

OOC;; Hey guys? If you're going to RP, please make it a little reasonable... Badgers and foxes don't exactly spare kits' lives. You'd be dead within seconds. ^^;;;
Anyway, I was looking through, and there are some people who posted and you never gave them a chance to respond. Wait for others and give them a chance to post if they're part of this topic. It's part of the rules, by the way.

iwillrule1122 wrote:

OOC: Are we gonna play this as kits or apprentices?

OOC;; Just wanted to respond and say, if you start the topic as kits, you continue as kits even if you had your apprentice ceremony just recently. This is to avoid any paradoxes.
@Blaze: I'm sorry I keep intruding on your topics. Just doing my job.
Anyway, you don't have to delete the fox part. I'm simply saying to be careful with what you're RPing out and keep it a bit reasonable. There's nothing wrong with it, but if you're going to have that event, please make sure it makes a bit of sense, especially with the fact that kits are extremely fragile.