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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Fri 9 Dec 2016 - 21:12 | |
| Greenpaw scowled as he tried to placate her. "Oh stuff it, that was a terrible attempt." Her foul temper rising to the top again. Her mood growing darker as she watched him gracefully tackle that stone, envy bubbling to the top.
"I'm sure that will work great if I'm attacking something immobile." The black apprentice's tone bitter and sarcastic, however she wanted to try again. She just didn't feel like 'embarrassing' herself in front of her mentor, even if she didn't quite respect him.
But Greenpaw decided she'd rather try again, then get in trouble by disobeying her mentor. Her next crouch was much better balanced, not quite as good as Thistlefall's, but it would be good enough for hunting. It was a good jumping off point, as she crept forward and leaped, landing on her own chosen stone. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Sat 10 Dec 2016 - 8:02 | |
| Thistlefall merely huffed, no bothering to shoot back another rude comment, the last thing they needed was to get in trouble for snarky commentary.
He watched as Greenpaw tried again, better this time, but of course it could still use work. "Better," was all he mewed, speaking truthfully. She may have to practice a few more times here before we set out and look for more actual prey, he thought, glancing behind him in the direction of further territory. |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Sun 11 Dec 2016 - 2:52 | |
| Greenpaw wasn't relieved when he didn't fire back with a retort, instead it only served to cause her more frustration. As her subconscious fought with embarrassment and unresolved anger. However, she was relieved that he felt her crouch and pounce wasn't terrible enough to warrant more criticism. Her prideful character wouldn't let her fail anymore than she already had, already she was making plans of practicing on her own.
The small black she-cat walked imperiously back towards her mentor. "Can we look around the territory more? You only showed me the gorge." She asked, adding her little disparaging comment at the end. Clearly she was displeased that her mentor wasn't up to the standards her mother had imposed.
ooc: greenpaw's so mean ;.; ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Sun 11 Dec 2016 - 9:46 | |
| Thistlefall lowered his gaze, there wasn't much more to show, their territory was pretty open. Then an idea struck him. There was a small hill in about the middle of the territory, perfect, Greenpaw would be able to see the entire territory from there. "Follow me then." He said, and turned, flicking his tail as he padded forward.
The small rise in the landscape was nearby, and they arrived pretty quickly. Thistlefall lead her up onto the hill, and sat down. "You can see most of our territory's vast grassland from here." He informed, but regretted saying it after realizing it was an obvious comment that would probably earn him another rude comment. |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Mon 12 Dec 2016 - 17:54 | |
| Greenpaw nodded sternly at her mentor as he led the way again. She watched Windclan territory go by, and felt a thrill knowing she would be roaming these lands by herself someday. She would be the fiercest warrior this clan had ever seen. Nothing like her pathetic leader, Ashstar.
As she came up next to her mentor, her eyes widened. If she hadn't been so wrapped up in the awe-inspiring view, she would have made a snide comment towards Thistlefall. But for the moment, she was silenced, mouth slightly agape. "Wow..." was all she could muster, as she felt the wind buffeting her.
Greenpaw let out an out of place battle cry and began to sprint into the grasslands, unable to stay still any longer. She didn't care if she left Thistlefall behind, she had no idea there was so much land to roam. Her head thrown back as she raced straight ahead. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Mon 12 Dec 2016 - 18:20 | |
| Thistlefall looked out over the expanse of territory, not expecting Greenpaw's next move.
"Isn't it grea-" he began, only to look down and see his apprentice yowling and sprinting down into the moor. "Greenpaw!" He called, she's going to scare off all the prey. He thought with an irritated expression. |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Tue 13 Dec 2016 - 18:57 | |
| Greenpaw didn't care, she would leave anyone behind and never stop running if she could. Her tail streaming out behind her, and her sleek pelt getting ruffled by the buffeting wind. Thistlefall's call slipped past her as she finally fell silent, but she didn't stop running. She hadn't had a chance to act like a kit, ever. It took her a bit, but she returned to him, no apologies just a wide grin that was slowly disappearing. "Windclan must have the best territory." She said, quite pleased with herself. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Wed 14 Dec 2016 - 9:24 | |
| Thistlefall muffed a grunt of disapproval, he let her comment on their territory distract him, and so the warrior let a smile drift over his muzzle. "It sure does, I'm not sure how the other clans survive being unable to see their territory, so many trees just get in the way." He commented, unintentionally lightening the mood.
He then turned, focusing back on their little patrol. "Perhaps we should start to head back to camp," he suggested, growing tired and not exactly wanting to do battle training. |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Wed 14 Dec 2016 - 16:33 | |
| Greenpaw was finally enjoying her mentor's company, nodding at his comment. She couldn't imagine being in any other clan. However, her frown was back in place at his next words. "Yeah, sure." She rolled her eyes to hide her disappoint and started back towards camp without waiting for him. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Wed 14 Dec 2016 - 18:04 | |
| Thistlefall took note of her disappointment, yet shoved it aside and followed her back to camp. They'd go on another patrol together soon enough, and of course she'd be able to leave whenever, considering a warrior attends. |
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