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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Tue 6 Dec 2016 - 6:38 | |
| Thistlefall had just recently become a warrior, and he already had an apprentice to train. To be honest, he was pretty worried, worried he'd mess up and gain Ashstar's disapproval. Yet, there was still a part of him that was overjoyed to have the opportunity to train an apprentice, and he couldn't wait to get started.
The newly appointed warrior sat at the edge of camp, close to the entrance. He had planned a patrol with Greenpaw, to show them outside the territory, hunting strategies, and possibly a few battle moves.
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Tue 6 Dec 2016 - 6:55 | |
| Greenpaw didn't really know her mentor, but she had heard he was a new warrior and her excitement at training had dwindled. She saw the warrior hovering at the entrance, almost sensing that he was as nervous as she was. "Hello." Her tone cool, unfriendly as she waited to see what he had in store for them today. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Tue 6 Dec 2016 - 7:16 | |
| Thistlefall flicked an ear at the sound of an approaching voice. He glanced to the side to see his apprentice, Greenpaw, nearing him. "Hello, Greenpaw." He started, quickly noting the look of unfriendliness that was worked its way across her face. "Ready to get going then? I'll show you around a bit before we get to training." He informed the younger cat, a little self cautious of her judgmental gaze. |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Tue 6 Dec 2016 - 9:40 | |
| Greenpaw wasn't very friendly to begin with, but as she was growing older, her tongue was growing sharper. The very small she-cat flicked her ears as he spoke, unwilling to rebel, but finding it hard to resist. "Sure." Nothing in her tone hinting that she'd warm up to her mentor anytime soon. She waited for the older feline to lead her away from the camp, the viewing of the territory the highlight of today. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Tue 6 Dec 2016 - 13:04 | |
| Thistlefall narrowed his eyes just slightly, flicking his tail as he turned silently and lead the way out of the camp, through the bramble tunnel.
Once out into the territory, he decided to take Greenpaw to the gorge. It was the first place he saw when Smokepelt took him on his first patrol outside of camp, and he really couldn’t loved it more. The newly appointed warrior lead the way quietly, and soon the sound of water crashing against rock could be heard. |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Tue 6 Dec 2016 - 16:32 | |
| The unfriendly she-cat didn't care that she was probably getting on Thistlefall's nerves. She followed him silently, observing the territory and keeping track of where they were going. The sound of rushing water made her nervous, she'd never heard that noise before. "What is that noise?" Greenpaw asked her mentor, her nervousness seeping into her voice. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Tue 6 Dec 2016 - 16:59 | |
| Finally, a tone other than bitterness coming from her. Thistlefall thought, but brushed it off and turned to face his apprentice. "It's the gorge." He said flatly, but quickly began to explain. "Make sure you keep a few steps back, if you fall in, the rapids will most certainly send you to StarClan." He informed her, a certain seriousness to his voice.
He then motioned with his tail for her to come up by his side, so she could look over the edge and see the fast-flowing waters below. "I'm sure you've heard plenty about the clan on the other side, RiverClan." |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Wed 7 Dec 2016 - 7:06 | |
| Greenpaw listened as he explained what the noise was, she stopped where she was at the threat of joining Starclan early. Her ears flattening against her head, why would he take her here in the first place if it was so dangerous. The small black she-cat didn't realize it was important she knew where such a dangerous place was. He motioned her closer, and she swallowed her fear and did as he said.
Her paws felt numb at the sight of the gaping gorge, rushing water, foamy white. He mentioned Riverclan and she growled involuntarily. "Of course I know Riverclan. Those foxhearts attacked our camp." Her tone was harsh, to mask the fear she had felt and the fear of reliving it. Greenpaw had wished to be in the fight more than anything, until it actually started and she realized she was out of her depth. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Wed 7 Dec 2016 - 8:33 | |
| Thistlefall glanced at his apprentice, feeling bad for how scared she appeared to be, but every apprentice needed to know what the gorge was, it's dangers, and what it held on the other side.
Now backing up, away from the rolling rapids below his paws, he beckoned Greenpaw to move away and follow him through the rest of the territory. "We can start to hunt, I'd like to see how much you know as well." |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Wed 7 Dec 2016 - 17:46 | |
| Greenpaw stared down at the rushing gorge for a long moment, before doing as Thistlefall said. She followed him while he led the way, her mind off track thinking about the battle. Until she tripped up on a clump of heather and forced herself to focus on the tom and this training session. "My mother always said my legs are too short to hunt rabbits." She said, almost conversationally to her mentor. Though she was only advising him of her shortcomings, which her mother had always made her aware of. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Wed 7 Dec 2016 - 18:26 | |
| Thistlefall lead her onward, but then turned to face her at the mention of her shorter legs. "I'm sure they'll grow longer, give it time." He said, in a way to assure her she could one day hut quicker prey. "let's try with a mouse or vole then, can you smell anything?" He asked, wanting to make sure she could begin to identify scents such as various prey. |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Thu 8 Dec 2016 - 10:36 | |
| Greenpaw frowned at his words, she didn't like him insinuating that her mother was wrong. But she decided to let it go, for now. His request earned a small nod, as she wrinkled her nose and scented the air. She could smell heather and cold wind, and there, a scent she recognized from the fresh kill pile. "I smell vole." She said, lowering her voice, and keeping an eye out for any prey. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Thu 8 Dec 2016 - 10:43 | |
| Thistlefall, happy to hear that she knew the scent of prey, decided to see how much more she knew. "Do you think you can track it?" He asked, genuinely wanting to know. This was the way Smokepelt had trained him, and he hoped it would prove effective for Greenpaw as well as it had for him. |
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Green
Number of posts : 136 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Fri 9 Dec 2016 - 15:01 | |
| Greenpaw paused at his request, inhaling deeply until she pinpointed which direction to head. Her pointy ears flicking to try and catch any noise of the vole. Her pale eyes landing on a thicket of gorse wiggling unnaturally, not from the wind. The small black she-cat pointed at it with her paw, but didn't wait for further instruction. She was going to catch this vole! Her crouch was all off, but she kept going with it, and leaped too soon, startling and scaring off the vole. "Foxdung!" Greenpaw cursed as the vole escaped her expert hunting technique. ______________________________________ Greenpaw of Windclan(20/80) Minnowpaw of Riverclan(20/80) Stonekit of Shadowclan(5/15) Goldenpaw of Thunderclan(20/80) |
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ZakoBlue
Characters : [Fr] : Fracturedhawk | [T] : Thistlefall | [Fu] : Furzethroat | [H] : Hazefur | [P] : Poplarstripe Clan/Rank : [RiverClan ~ W] : [WindClan ~ YW] : [WindClan ~ NAW] :[WindClan ~ YW] : [RiverClan ~ YW] Number of posts : 856 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: The Green Thistle ((CLOSED)) Fri 9 Dec 2016 - 16:21 | |
| Thistlefall inspected her movements, quickly noticing they were a bit off. He watched as she missed the prey, he now knew what he needed to in order to get her training moving along.
The newly appointed warrior padded up to her side, "good try, you'll get it next time." He said with a hopeful tone, no matter how irritated she would probably be. He spotted a stone out of the corner of his eye, and decided it to be a good training target. "You were crouching wrong, try keeping your body straighter." Without much more of an idea of how to explain the correct position, he demonstrated himself, crouching down in a swift movement, he pounced on the stone he had spotted a few moments ago, his leap providing a graceful arch and clean landing.
Hopefully, Greenpaw was more of a tactical learner, and would get what he was demonstrating. |
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