A dapple in camp.

The moody She-cat poked her head out of the nursery.It was so big and...Dirty?Yep,dirty.Dapplekit frowned how could anywhere be so dirty?A pile of dead things in the centre and cats of all different shapes and sizes walked around camp not caring.It was feral to the young She-cat.The kit surveyed the camp,she was not impressed.Dapplekit padded out of nursery and she was instantly mesmerised by the sunlight that hurt her eyes.She blinked a couple of times adjusting to the bright light,with a sigh she continued forward.

OOC: The words are so small.

Sleekkit watched from a distance as Dapplekit frowned again and again. He padded next to her and hissed, "What's your problem?!"

"Everything is so weird out here,I mean who leaves dead things in the middle of camp?It's gross!" she replied simply.She looked over at the fresh-kill pile and felt herself vomit a little in her mouth.Dapplekit's mottled fur was covered in dust the winds had sweapt up,the She-cat looked at her pelt in horror.

"Such a fuzzy ball. Get along with it then." Sleekkit snapped. Then he turned away.

"What do you mean?" Dapplekit meowed confused.The She-cat glanced down at fur quickly returning to groom it.

OOC: I cant kill her infront of the whole clan! I need you to sneak out sorry for ruining plot but still...

Dawnpaw was outside of camp listening to the kitten's conversation. What's wrong with that she-kit? Why didn't she like camp? She was born in ThunderClan she should be loyal and enjoyable not well whatever she was. Dawnpaw sighed with exasperation. Plus why was she soo nosy in my business! She knew that she hated that kit.

Sleekkit padded to the nursery without a second glance back.

Dapplekit looked around,sighing she got to her paws.Her paws carried her to the exit though she didn't know that.The mottled kit looked up at Dawnpaw."Hello Dawnpaw,why do you think camp is so dirty.I mean who leaves dead things in the middle of camp and it's so dirty!Don't you think it's desguisting?"she meowed.

OOC: Can you please use good grammar and spelling? It's hurting meh eyes just seeing it.

OOC:What do you mean it's all good.It might be because I'm on mobile.

I mean like this sentence:

Hello Dawnpaw,why do you think camp is so dirty.I mean who leaves dead things in the middle of camp and it's so dirty!Don't you think it's desguisting?

Now some corrections:

Hello Dawnpaw, why do you think the camp is so dirty? I mean who leaves dead things in the middle of the camp, it's so dirty! Don't you think it's disgusting?

OCC:I read it over.I can't believe my grammar was that bad.

OOC:Just gonna pop in right here, I know for one that typing with good grammar is close to impossible, especially if it's a phone. Right now I'm on computer but on phone or tablet, you may see a few mistakes. Besides, nobody's perfect. I'll just go now.

OOC:This was a normal topic...you can join if you want but Dapplekit is gonna get murded.So really big drama conspiracy happening.

OOC: Let's get back to the topic shall we?

Sleekkit watches from the nursery.