Sparkpaw's assessment [Closed]

Wildstrike padded over to the apprentice den and called out for the young cat "Sparkpaw meet me by the camp entrance". He then walked over there, to be honest he still felt like he needed to prove to Scorchfang that he would have been a great mentor for his kits, as he had seen Froststone the new deputy take out Poppypaw for his assessment he had spooked to Scorchfang and now Sparkpaw would be doing her it's a her right?! assessment. He shoot a quick glare towards Froststone as he saw him, he had wanted to be deputy so bad and his brother knew that but this was for the best, Froststone wouldn't have been picked unless Scorchfang tought he would do a great job... Better than him... He let out a low sigh, mabye one day.. If Froststone passes Scorchfang would have to pick a new deputy and.. No! He couldn't think like that! Froststone deserved this...

He looked up and saw Sparkpaw coming his way, he smiled slightly. He couldn't let his ambitions get in the way of mentoring and serving his clan! But still, the feeling that he wasn't good enough for his brother to trust him as the mentor to his kits or deputy of his clan still were there it didn't matter how much he tried to forget it, it wouldn't leave him alone, ever since Froststone had been made deputy...
Now enough of him! He where here to mentor Sparkpaw, not to feel pity for himself!

ooc: yee Sparkbab is a gorl ;D

Sparkpaw blinked awake. She was just about to kill that raccoon... But it was a dream! She pulled herself up and was ready to squint, but remembered as she stepped outside. The sun was dimmed greatly, leaving everything a deep crimson. "What are we doing today?" The she-cat asked. Wildstrike seemed deep in thought. Maybe he was deciding.

"It's time for you'r hunting assessment Sparkpaw, I want you to catch one frog or toad, one rodent and a lizard, but feel free to catch more, the clan needs it and it will just show how good you have become at hunting" he meowed with a encouraging smile "I will be close by and I will jump in if you get into any trouble" he continued.

"Now get going! I'm sure you can do this!" he told her. He waited awhile after she left camp before heading out after her, he followed her scent but keept himself hidden all the time.


OOC: Feel free to double post!

Sparkpaw nodded with butterflies in her stomach. Her assessment! "Ok." He disappeared into the bushes. She couldn't help but feel like she was alone. The she-cat turned around, sniffing for the right scent. After an agonizing moment, she found it. Toad! She could see it, sitting on a log nearby. She slid downward, into a hunter's crouch and, more carefully than she'd ever done, slunk forward. It ribbitted and hopped to the side, one hop. She wasn't far now. She decided to take a risk and leapt. SQUELCH! Her back paw made possibly the loudest mudsquelch in the history of mudsquelches, and it took lots of force to come out, so she fell forward, front legs outstretched, and... slamming right onto the frog! It died on impact. Surprised but pleased, Sparkpaw stood.

The member 'Jade O' Lantern' has done the following action : Dices roll

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'Hunting Dice' : 8

Her next attempt was a bit better. Sparkpaw shook the mud off and moved on to a drier spot, where the scent of pine was strong. Mice scurried not too far. Nice, she'd grab one for the assessment. She did the same thing(though avoiding the muddy spots) as she did last time, getting a tail-length away from a mouse nibbling on a pinecone. With a much more graceful leap, she jumped, landing on the mouse's back. And fell on her face. Well... At least she got it.

The member 'Jade O' Lantern' has done the following action : Dices roll

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'Hunting Dice' : 3

Lizards hung out by the rocks, so Sparkpaw went there. It was the closest thing to sunny at the moment. It was easy to get one. It was sleeping, so she managed to get super close before arching her neck and biting the lizard's, killing it in its sleep. She pricked her muzzle with a spike, but it didn't seem to be bleeding. While on her lucky streak, she decided to hunt a little more.

The member 'Jade O' Lantern' has done the following action : Dices roll

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'Hunting Dice' : 4

ooc: for the sake of I WANT A TEN she'll encounter a predator while out :)

Sparkpaw trotted along, not far from the rocks. She was 78% sure she saw a snake slither by, so she turned away from that spot- right towards camp. She caught a frog, this time much better, and buried it. Then, she smelled something. It was coming from the snake's direction, but she investigated it anyway. A snarl made her look up from her search. Suddenly, she found herself face to face with a snarling fox. "...Wildstrike!?" She shouted fearfully. Was a raccoon not bad enough? She was about to turn and run, but the fox lunged forward, straight toward her head. Just then, a dark blur rushed in front of her, knocking her back. She stumbled but stayed to her feet. Scorchfang!? He was here too? That meant... her leader and Orchidpaw's father had watched her tripping and all that! She cringed inside. He must have judged her about it. She'd have to do better next time. The large and fluffy tom had the fox's teeth scratch his shoulder. "Thank you!" She blurted. He may have saved her life.

Fox used Thrash on Sparkpaw, dealing 20 damage and using 20 stamina. But Scorchfang blocked it, so she's fine.


Fox
90/90 HP
260/280 SP

Spark
20/20 HP
80/80 SP

Scorch
85/100 HP
260/280 SP

The member 'Jade O' Lantern' has done the following action : Dices roll

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'Hunting Dice' : 3

(OOC: As a request from Jade, Scorch shall swoop in and save Spark. X3)

Wildstrike wasn't the only cat secretly observing Sparkpaw during her assessment. Scorchfang wanted to see for himself just how well a mentor his younger brother was, and how along the young apprentice who had an attraction to one of his youngest sons was coming along on her training. He smiled in satisfaction at each successful catch she had made, and he nodded in silent approval.

Then his blood turned to ice. He had heard the fox just before Sparkpaw had, and he watched in horror as the russet-furred creature launched out from the shadows to attack. Without even a second thought, the large tom sprinted to Sparkpaw's rescue. He leaped over her to land right in front of her, and he let out a yowl of pain and fury as the fox's wickedly sharp teeth met with his shoulder. He wasn't a proper leader yet, he still had one life to lose, but there was no way he was going to let this apprentice be maimed!

Scorchfang used Blocking Leap on Fox, losing 15 damage and costing 20 stamina.

Sparkpaw has been protected.

Scorchfang
85/100 HP
260/280 SP

Fox
90/90 HP
260/280 SP

Wildstrike charged out of the bushes just a few seconds later than his brother, seeing him save his apprentice "Scorchfang.. Thanks for saving her, she could have been dead, I wasn't fast enough.." he looked down, mabye he wasn't good enough... His apprentice could have died! Mabye he isn't good enough to be a mentor..

He then heard the fox behind him and rememberd that it where there, he swiftly spun around to face the fox. He reared up at his back legs and clawed at it's face with both front paws as he growled loudly.

Wildstrike used Upright Front Paws on Fox, dealing -11 HP and costing -20 SP

Wildstrike
45/45 HP
140/160

Fox
79/90 HP
260/280 SP

Sparkpaw knew what she could do would be useful, so she darted to the side, swiping at the creature's belly. The Fox retaliated to Scorchfang, angry that its prey- Which was me, She thought with a shudder- had been lost. It bit down hard on his tail angrily. That had to hurt.

Sparkpaw used Belly Rake, using 10 stamina and dealing 7 damage.

Fox used Iron Bite, using 20 stamina and dealing 30 damage.

Fox
72/90 HP
260/280 SP

Wild
45/45 HP
140/160 SP

Scorch
55/100 HP
260/280 SP

Spark
20/20 HP
70/80 SP

Howling at the new fresh wave of pain on his tail, Scorchfang whipped around and managed to yank it free, which then began lashing behind him, sending tufts of fur flying. Snarling with rage, he leaped up on the fox’s back, his hefty body and weight knocking it to the ground. He dug his claws into its shoulders and his teeth into an ear as he scratched his hind claws against its spine mercilessly.

Scorchfang uses Leap-and-Hold on Fox, dealing 14 damage and costing 10 stamina.

Fox is Pinned for one turn.

Scorchfang
55/100 HP
250/280 SP

Fox
58/90 HP
240/280 SP