Another Soul Lost (OPEN TO ALL TC)

Daisypaw ran into camp, torn. She couldn't believe it! Another soul was brutally taken away. She looked around for Duskfall. When she finally spotted him, she ran up to him and explained what happened. "It was RiverClan!" She said between tears.

Stormpaw staggered into the camp, fur matted and bloody from the fight. "I'll kill them, I'll kill them all! All of those Riverclan fish-faced fox-heart mouse-dungs!" On her back, the she-cat carried a small apprentice...Flashpaw. "This is the last straw! They strike again, those dung faces! They killed another Thunderclan cat! And look what happened to Flashpaw!" Tears built up in her eyes, but she held them in. She wasn't going to cry. Stormpaw was too brave to cry.

"Daisypaw!" Goldenpaw exclaimed. "You look just as I did during the badger attack! What happened? Let's get you to Nightfire and Coalpaw." She looked at the injured apprentice. Golly, she thought. She looks worse than I did!

Daisypaw's ears flattened. "No! It's not fair.…" She cried. But she reluctantly followed Goldenpaw's instructions.

"Nihtfire! Coalpaw!" Goldenpaw mewed. "While we wait, tell me what happened, please, Daisypaw." She meowed, sadly. She.hated seeing other cats in pain.

Littlefang ran over. As he saw Flashpaw, he yowled. "What happened?"

OOC: Flashpaw ain't dead

Edited

OOC:Flashpaws a girl and she's not dead she just has broken leg but it will only slow down her warrior training so she's not crippled

OOC: God almighty I edited the post

OOC:lol sorry didn't see that

~A few moments later Ghostpaw came into camp with Shinepaw's body draped over his back. After he set his cousin down gently he stared at her corpse, his eyes full of grief and anger.~

~Lionpaw, who had been in the apprentice den ran out as the smell of blood filled his nose. Seeing Ghostpaw set down Shinepaw's body he bolted over, a wail of grief escaping his maw. He knew instantly she was dead, her once bright and lively eyes clouded over.~

Cloverpaw ran out hearing Lionpaw and saw Shinepaws body. "Shinepaw no!!!!" Her eyes filled with tears and they spilled and she laid by Shinepaws body for a vigil. Cloverpaw just wanted to be with Sunpaw and hoped he came soon. How could she tell him that his sister was dead..?

Goldenpaw meowed with fright, "Golly! Shinepaw? Uh! I need to learn how to fight so I can get RiverClan back!" She hissed a little bit. She snarled, "Those fox hearted badger dungs!"

~After a few moments of staying next to Shinepaw's body Ghostpaw stood and padded towards Nightfire and Coalpaw's den. though he hadn't been in the battle until the end Larchpaw had given him deep scratches on his shoulders when she pushed him off of her and they were still bleeding quite heavily, covering his chest and forelegs in red sticky liquid.~


~Lionpaw let out another wail before laying his head on his sister, burrying his face in her fur. She used to be so warm but in death her body had grown cold and this only served to upset Lionpaw more. Lifting his head Lionpaw look down at his sister and just stared. His eyes, before sad, became determined as he decided he wouldn't leave Shinepaw's side until she was buried.~ "I'll stay with you until the end. StarClan will light your path and welcome you with open paws. You will forever be in my heart." ~Finally Lionpaw rasped his tongue over his sister's head before he laid back down and touched his nose to her pelt once more.~