Ravens Assesment

Ravenpaw reared her head back when a hissing sound came from the hole. she screamed when a snake came out of the hole, its tongue flicking in and out. Ravenpaw stumbled back as it advanced.

"ravenpaw run" she hissed jumping out from her bush and infront of ravenpaw.

the snake continued hissing and lifted its head in an arch getting ready to strike.

Ravenpaw ignored Butterflystar and stepped back in front of the snake, a growl erupting from her throat.

butterflystar hissed again "ravenpaw get away from the snake" and quickly pushed her out of the way just as the snake's head snapped forward and bit butterflystar in the neck.

"Butterflystar!" Ravenpaw cried out, and then, angry, turned towards the snake and flung it away before turning back to Butterflystar.

butterflystar's body started spazzing out as the venom spread through her blood.

when butterflystar opened her eyes she saw stars and knew automaticaly she lost her 2nd life.

Ravenpaw was laying beside her, her eyes filled with tears and she was shaking. "You just died, because of me, didn't you?"

when butterflystar opened her eyes ravenpaw was right above her "get out of her" she said still thinking the snake was around and she got up weekly.

"The snake is dead, Butterflystar.." Ravenpaw whispered, moving slightly out of her way.

butterflystar took a deep breath and collapsed "Thank starclan, go get your prey and I will meet you in camp"

"I don't want to leave you though!" Ravenpaw told her.

"ill make it just go" she said and tried to get up again.

Ravenpaw shook her head, frustrated. she knew that if she stayed, Butterflystar would go off on her when she felt better. "Fine.." she mumbled, "Just make it back to camp.." With that, she raced off to pick up her catch and then make her way to camp.

"I will" and she slowly started for camp.

OOC: End of Topic?