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Characters : CK, Cloudkit O, orbit ML, Marigoldleaf LS, Lightningstrike, TB, Treebranch , TIP, Tinypaw C, Clyde, B, blizzard SP, Sootpaw HP: Hailpaw
Clan/Rank : (A) = alive (D) = deceased mL: Shadowclan Warrior(A) O: rouge(D) B: rouge(D) Sootpaw: RC apprentice(A) LS: RC warrior(D) TIP: WC apprentice(D) TB: TC warrior(D) HP: WC apprentice(A) CK: skc kit (D)
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 | | Subject: a prophecy for windclan Sat 27 Jun 2015 - 11:21 | |
| Ok how about this?
The small, the fired pelt, and the needed will be in the maze while the small and important will be gone from the forest.
My windclan cat could receive it or like a mc or Mca or falconstar.
What it means: a cat who is small, a cat who has a fire colored pelt, and an important cat will be stuck in the tunnels. There will be a prey shortage while they are in the tunnels.
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| | Subject: Re: a prophecy for windclan Sat 27 Jun 2015 - 11:30 | |
| Again, I love your creativity...
But the prophecy doesn't really work.
It would be kind of weird for a prey shortage to happen just because they are in the tunnels. It doesn't make much sense.
Plus, because the prophecy is somewhat urgent, and it takes a lot of time to decipher the meaning of a prophecy, it would also be lethal to the cats, seeing that they'd probably die before they were rescued.
Apologies for kind of attacking it with my realistic views, but that's just how I feel about it. A prey shortage because of cats disappearing? I don't think that'd make much sense, if anything there would be a bit more prey because there wouldn't be as many cats to feed, even if it means just three less, it still wouldn't make sense that there will be a prey shortage while they are in there, because it seems to me that the prey would come back as soon as the cats were rescued.
Again, I love your creativity and I love you pitching out these ideas. They're nice to have. ______________________________________ |
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Topaz
Characters : CK, Cloudkit O, orbit ML, Marigoldleaf LS, Lightningstrike, TB, Treebranch , TIP, Tinypaw C, Clyde, B, blizzard SP, Sootpaw HP: Hailpaw
Clan/Rank : (A) = alive (D) = deceased mL: Shadowclan Warrior(A) O: rouge(D) B: rouge(D) Sootpaw: RC apprentice(A) LS: RC warrior(D) TIP: WC apprentice(D) TB: TC warrior(D) HP: WC apprentice(A) CK: skc kit (D)
Number of posts : 691
Age : 1790
| | Subject: Re: a prophecy for windclan Sat 27 Jun 2015 - 11:32 | |
| Yeah, thanks for telling me. I tend to be unrealistic...........
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