Hanging around camp (any TC cat join PLEASE! Imma bored...)

Deadfrost brought his kill back to camp, and sat down outside the warriors's den. He began to lick his wounds from the battle. I wonder where everyone is..

Sandkit prances up to Deadfrost,"ya, I haven't seen may cats come in today?!", she lays down bside him and asks,"hey, do you want some help with those?", she flicks one of his wounds with her tail

OCC: but where is everyone?

Deadfrost shook his head. "No. I can manage."

OCC: Sorry for being rude, but I have told you SO many times, RP IN 3RD PERSON PAST TENSE! I dunno how many times I have told you, Sand>>

Snowpaw padded out of the Medicine cat den and limped over "Hi" She mewed

"Hi!" Angelkit called from a distance as she walked up to her friends
OCC:Is this in camp???????-or out of camp???

OCC:In camp

Deadfrost nodded to the two she-cats. "Hi. Have you seen Featherfall?"

As if on cue, the gray she-cat walked out of the nursery.
"Hello, Snowpaw, Sandkit, Angelpaw."
She said to the apprentices and kit. She went and sat by Deadfrost and gave him a scowl.
"Oh no dear your doing it all wrong. Don't lick your wound so roughly or it'll get raw."
She said giving it a more tender lick.

"hi Featherfall!" repleyed Sandkit,"I'm going to become an apprentice today!!!" she anocouced

padding from behind her friend, she said,
"It's rather chilly, isn't it?"

Sandkit shakes her pelt,"ya,you're right,leaf bare is not far behind"Sandkit opens her eyes wider,"leaf bare is on the night of the gathering! hopefuly I can go!!!"

Deadfrost gave and amused huff as Featherfall licked his wounds softly. "Thanks for the tip," he purred. He smiled at Sunset. "I agree. My nose is ice!"

OCC: Sand...RP properly...

OCC: what am I doing wrong?!?!

OOC: you dun say she DOES you say she DID
instead of
'Sandkit shakes her pelt,"ya,you're right,leaf bare is not far behind"Sandkit opens her eyes wider,"leaf bare is on the night of the gathering! hopefuly I can go!!!"'
its

Sandkit shook her pelt."ya,you're right,leaf bare is not far behind!"Sandkit opened her eyes wider."leaf bare is on the night of the gathering! hopefuly I can go!!!"

OCC: Thank you Sun>>@ Feather: Should this be when you announce your having kits? Winterkit will be on, she said.

Deadfrost stretched his neck and licked Featherfall's face. "Thank you, Mrs. Medicine cat," he mewed amusingly.