Tales of DuskClan

This is where I will post chapters of DuskClan's Beginnings and The Forbidden Romance.

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Alliegances:
Leader, Flailstrike
Deputy, Tansywhisker
Other cats:
Shade
Lion
Eagle
Talon
Dew
Swallow

Lionstrike stretched his old legs out.  The former medicine cat sat in the elder's den with two apprentices, Oakpaw and Hollypaw.  "Can you please tell us a story?" Oakpaw asked to the aging tom.  "Sure.  Do you want to know about the beginnings of DuskClan?" he replied.  "That would be awesome!" Oakpaw said.  "I think that Duskfeather founded DuskClan, right?" Hollypaw asked Lionstrike.  "No, you are mistaken.  Duskfeather was a noble cat, but he didn't create DuskClan.  Let me tell you a story on how DuskClan formed."

The heart of Flailstrike sagged.  He knew what was going to happen.  I'm gonna get exiled... After attacking the RiverClan deputy Wolfclaw unprovoked, nocat would forgive him.  "I'm ready for any punishment, Cormorantstar," he declared to the leader.  Cormorantstar nodded decisively.  "Let all cats able to catch their own prey gather under the hazel branch for a clan meeting!" he yowled out to the other cats.  Cormorantstar wanted to get this over with.  "Flailstrike has admitteed that he trespassed RiverClan territory and attacked the RiverClan deputy, Wolfclaw.  From now on, he is no longer part of ShadowClan, and if you find him on ShadowClan territory, you should drive him away."  The black-pelted leader did not want Flailstrike on his territory again.  "Go away now, unless you have something to say," he snarled.  Flailstrike replied, "Actually, I have something to say.  May StarClan light your path, always."  His gaze fluttered to all of the cats gathered for his exile.  After the brown tabby left, Tansywhisker stepped forward.  "May I speak?" she asked the leader.  Cormorantstar reluctantly obliged as he jumped off the hazel branch.  "If you force Flailstrike to leave, I will leave, too."  Her eyes were staring right at the leader.  "Nothing will change my decision, Tansywhisker," he said.  "I will stay true to my word.  I am leaving ShadowClan."  Murmurs of surprise came out of the ShadowClan cats, who didn't think that Tansywhisker would leave ShadowClan. The golden she-cat left ShadowClan's camp for the last time in her life.