The new apprentice(open)

Hazepaw padded into the apprentice den her silver fur shining like her crystal blue eyes.I'm a apprentice now she thought,I can hunt and go on patrols and...this is going to be so much more fun than being a kit!The apprentice couldn't wait to begin being mentored and to meet the other apprentices.

Eaglepaw had been missing her friend. She was Hazepaw, she had recently had her apprentice ceremony and earned her apprentice name. She really did like spending time with Hazepaw, but she knew that when kits became apprentices', they could change. Now, this she-cat was very cheerful but did things a certain way. She decided that she would let Hazepaw come out first, knowing for sure that she wanted to go out of the apprentices' den. Eaglepaw raced over and smiled "Want to play old friend?" she asked with a flick of her tail as she had tackled the newly apprenticed she-cat.

"Hey!" Yowled the she-cat in surprise as she leapt back up."you'll pay for that!"She laughed as she batted at her old friend.

Eaglepaw purred "I might just!" she mewed.

OOC: Shortness

Hazekit laughed "Oh yes you will!"The small apprentice's eyes glinted as she pounced on to Eaglepaw" Ha!"she purred as landed on the other apprentice.

Eaglepaw smiled "But I've learned moves you haven't!" she mewed as she pushed on Hazepaw's belly light enough that it wouldn't hurt her, but strong enough that it would push her off. She stumbled up and looked at Hazepaw with a twitch of amusement with her whisker, waiting for the young she-cat to respond to the move she had just used.

"Aww wish I was an apprentice sooner!...But I'll get you!"Hazepaw mewed with a smile.She studied the older apprentice for a momment, Then sprinted at Eaglepaw grabbing her tail.She gave it a gentle yank" Ha bet you weren't expecting that!"she mewed with a laugh.(sorry about the other one I wasn't t to sure if I should keep it or not)^^

(I don't know if you don't know this yet but...You can't control another persons character like you just did with Eaglepaw. I'm also sorry this is a OOC post only, I just think if you edit it then it would make a little more sense. I know I'm not staff too, its just a reminder for the future ^^)

Hazepaw smiled happily it was just like when they were kits.When Eaglepaw was apprenticed Hazepaw had felt alone...she had Moonkit but she just wasn't as much fun as the older she-cat.Hazepaw's silver tail twitched subconsciously as she thought.The apprentice released Eaglepaw's tail."That was fun!"She mewed,panting.Hazepaw began to clean her silver dappled fur.She looked up at the other apprentice with a smile.

Eaglepaw nodded "Yeah" she mewed as she soon heard her mentor calling for her "I have to go" she mewed "Want to meet later?" she asked.

Hazepaw smiled"Yeah, see you later,maybe we could go hunt later?"she mowed.Hazepaw twitched her tail to say goodbye and resumed cleaning herself.