Skia
Characters : Gentlenose[G], Rippleshadow[R], Mistcloud[M], Fawnpaw[F], and Marigoldpaw[A] Clan/Rank : [G] Young Warrior of Thunderclan | [R] Young Warrior of Riverclan | [M] Exiled Newly Appointed Warrior of Shadowclan | [F] Windclan Apprentice | [A] Skyclan Apprentice Number of posts : 784 Age : 22
| Subject: The Seven Deadly Sins Mon 9 May 2016 - 22:46 | |
| I wrote my first serious poem! Any other poem I've ever written was something stupid I wrote about my dogs or a flower or something. xD Welp. I'm actually an atheist, so this poem was a little bit out of my area, but I thought I'd do my best. Enjoy!
Lust A primal instinct A passionate flame Lust for power Lust for attention Lust for fame A white van An innocent man A girl snatched away for years The ones most consumed by their lust Could be the ones you most dearly trust
Gluttony The privileged stuff their faces 5% of the world’s population generating 30% of the world’s waste Reduce, reuse, recycle? Hah, those words aren’t part of their vocabulary They pass by the less fortunate, thinking “Glad that’s not me” and move on without a second thought Some are given more than they could want, never lifting a finger While others work their hardest for everything they have Tell me, how is that fair?
Greed Money It’s one of the first words children understand It dictates our life, determining every second of our future 20% of Americans own 85% of the country’s wealth That’s a staggering statistic They say money is the root of all evil And you know what? I think they’re right What wouldn’t someone do for a million dollars? Such a flimsy piece of paper Holds so much power Imagine what the world would be like If we didn’t fight over such a thing?
Sloth Sitting, glued to your chair Eyes staring at the glowing screen You hear of mass murders, genocide, starvation The world would be better without it, don’t you think? But tell me, what have you done that has actually made a change? Our world is dying, crumbling down around us But we’re too blind to see the clues Too deaf to hear the screams of the Earth beneath our feet We’re too scared, no, too lazy to do anything about it
Wrath War. Bombs. Guns. Death. A never ending cycle How many lives have to be sacrificed How many children have to lose their family Before we learn our lesson? How many times have we heard the phrase “Violence never solves anything”? But it falls upon deaf ears Genocide after genocide Dictator after dictator Will we only be satisfied When blood runs thick in rivers? And there are no more lives to spare?
Envy We’ve all felt it That jealousness They have something you want Whether it be an item, or a friend’s attention A mind full of “Why can’t I have this?” And “Why can’t I have that?” Why is it so hard to focus on the good things? Forget what you don’t have And cherish what you do have You’ll be surprised how your quality of life improves
Pride In little doses It’s not so bad But when you become addicted, that’s the issue Too proud to admit you’re wrong Too proud to back down Even when you know you’re wrong Even when you’ve lost Your ego grows out of control Pushing everyone away At first you’re the king The best of them all But after a while You realize you’re alone What’s the point in being the best If there’s no one around to care?
Seven Sins Called deadly for a reason They’re all around us Poisoning our lives No matter how much you deny it You’ve personally felt each and every one There is no treatment There is no cure They’re what makes us human
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Caitywolfy
Characters : [A]dderkit | [R]ipplekit | [L]eafkit Clan/Rank : ThunderClan/Kit | RiverClan/Kit | ShadowClan/Kit Number of posts : 392 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The Seven Deadly Sins Thu 9 Jun 2016 - 6:04 | |
| That is an amazing poem :D really enjoyed reading it lol |
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