Hail falls from the sky, only to crash down to the ground and shatter(open)

A fluffy gray tom with electric blue eyes padded through the little territory that Goldpaw and Ashcloud owned. Hail flicked his tail and h hunted and soon he had two small finches, mice were breeding like well mice in the barn that he lived in and the taste was boring so he thought he'd try for a few birds, and to locate a foxes den that he had scented days ago. But before he knew it the fox had found him and was on him in an instant. Within five minuets Hail was dead