| Coldheart's Death | |
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Kitty Former Staff
Characters : Murkyriver ♀ | Snowvixen ♀ | Hollowgrove ♀ | Mountainpaw ♀ | Loonkit ♀ ~~ Copper was here Clan/Rank : Riverclan | Windclan | Shadowclan | Thunderclan Number of posts : 4989 Gender : She/Her - ash was here :3 and Ro! Age : 21
| Subject: Coldheart's Death Thu 31 Jan 2013 - 12:32 | |
| OOC: It's her time, guys. She's been played and she's done.
ic: Coldheart ran out of Thunderclan camp. She was really upset. Her long pelt smooth, but not groomed. She couldn't take it; she slid to a halt, and looked at the ground, What would she do? tears streamed from her eyes. It was late night; and Larchkit had been sound asleep. well, yeah. Her roleplayer didn't know what else to put. D: |
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Mink
Number of posts : 2105
| Subject: Re: Coldheart's Death Thu 31 Jan 2013 - 12:42 | |
| Occ: We had this huge chat over the chat box and yeah Icestream I going to kill her and shiz and he says a fox killed her CX E'yep Ic: Icestream walked into the clearing seeing her. "What's the matter?" He asked. ______________________________________ |
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Kitty Former Staff
Characters : Murkyriver ♀ | Snowvixen ♀ | Hollowgrove ♀ | Mountainpaw ♀ | Loonkit ♀ ~~ Copper was here Clan/Rank : Riverclan | Windclan | Shadowclan | Thunderclan Number of posts : 4989 Gender : She/Her - ash was here :3 and Ro! Age : 21
| Subject: Re: Coldheart's Death Thu 31 Jan 2013 - 12:46 | |
| Coldheart looked at Icestream. Her eyes showed sadness and regret. "Everything." she mewed, "What do you care, anyways? I lied to you, I'm not your real mother. You know it." she growled. ______________________________________ |
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Mink
Number of posts : 2105
| Subject: Re: Coldheart's Death Thu 31 Jan 2013 - 12:49 | |
| Icestream bared his teeth. "I knew you were a selfish little brat" He growled. He took a swing at her face. "You are a liar!" He took an other swing and tipped her over. He put his paws on her chest. "Any else you want to say?" He growled. ______________________________________ |
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Kitty Former Staff
Characters : Murkyriver ♀ | Snowvixen ♀ | Hollowgrove ♀ | Mountainpaw ♀ | Loonkit ♀ ~~ Copper was here Clan/Rank : Riverclan | Windclan | Shadowclan | Thunderclan Number of posts : 4989 Gender : She/Her - ash was here :3 and Ro! Age : 21
| Subject: Re: Coldheart's Death Thu 31 Jan 2013 - 12:53 | |
| Coldheart winced. "Yes." she said. Blood trickling from her eyes. "Please, don't harm Larchkit, and, take care of her." she said with her final breath. "I would have done everything for you. But if that's how you feel, I can't change tha-" she broke off. she shut her eyes, and with her last breath she said, "I always loved you as my own, and I will always watch you from Starclan." her voice was shallow, for the warrior's claws were digging into her chest. blood started to flow. ______________________________________ |
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Mink
Number of posts : 2105
| Subject: Re: Coldheart's Death Thu 31 Jan 2013 - 13:00 | |
| Icestream dug them in harder. "I was never yours. I wish you where never in my life." He growled and pushed her body away(Gowd I'm mean) "Have fun, liar." He groomed his blood and dragged her dead body into the stream. "There." He washed himself in the stream and walked away. ______________________________________ |
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Kitty Former Staff
Characters : Murkyriver ♀ | Snowvixen ♀ | Hollowgrove ♀ | Mountainpaw ♀ | Loonkit ♀ ~~ Copper was here Clan/Rank : Riverclan | Windclan | Shadowclan | Thunderclan Number of posts : 4989 Gender : She/Her - ash was here :3 and Ro! Age : 21
| Subject: Re: Coldheart's Death Thu 31 Jan 2013 - 13:04 | |
| (yeah. Well, now she's gone.)
Coldheart's eyes widened with her last breath as the ice-cold stream took her last breaths. As she had died, She'd watch over her family forever.
THE END ______________________________________ |
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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Coldheart's Death Fri 1 Feb 2013 - 4:00 | |
| Ooc: ....What.
First off, why would Icestream kill her on the spot, despite his normally-caring nature, just because she said she lied? They still took care of him as a kit and raised him. I thought he already knew she wasn't his real mother? That's why Flamestar trained him o.o
Then, why is Coldheart crying? Why does she want herself killed? No one gets that upset because they told a lie...What the heck? O-o
I'm not saying she can't die but...At least make a little more sense in it if you ever decide to kill one of your next lives in the future. ______________________________________ |
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Mink
Number of posts : 2105
| Subject: Re: Coldheart's Death Fri 1 Feb 2013 - 10:22 | |
| Welll Stormi I was thinking the same thing, but I just kinda went along with it because she really wanted Icestream to kill her 0-0 ______________________________________ |
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