The Exile of a Warrior

"I am your deputy, the one who was selected by your leader to carry out commands!"

Occ- Sorry, I saw your name. Edited the post. XD fail.

Metalshard kicked Silversoul off of her with her metal leg. Getting up she walked over to Shinepaw and stood by her friend "I hunt for you, I potrol the borders, I am loyal." she mewed. She looked at Deadfrost "You are not the clan that took me in, you are fox-hearted monsters!" she growled "Goldenstar would not be this cruel!" Looking at Shinepaw she understood her friend couldn't come with her. "I'm sorry." she said. She made her way to the exit "I was proud to call this place my home, until it became cold with hate." she turned around to face her clan. "Goodbye." she took a few steps before turning it into a jog, then a run, and then, she dissapered into the forest.


occ- I am ofishally a rouge :D

Shinepaw blinked her eyes a few times, holding back tears. Soon, sadness turned to anger. She turned to face Silversoul. "I hate you, fox hearted monster!" She spat, and turned to Deadstar. She glared at him. "And you, I will never forgive you. Your a horrible leader, and i'm sure this deputy will be just as bad as you, mouse dung." She spat, and ran into the the Medicine Cat den. As soon as she entered, she let out a yowl of anger and sadness. Her best friend was gone.

Occ- I think I may have gone to far XD

Silversouls fur was thick and protected well. Not even a scratch showed up. When Shinepaw said her words, she did not care. If soot wants to die, she could've gone to the thunder path. The lies were obvious. She flicked her tail to the closest apprentices, Duskpaw and Flamepaw.
"You two,"
She said.
"Guard the entrance to her den injured cats can go in, but Shinepaw cannot leave."
She turned to Deadstar.
"I made sure Shinepaw cannot leave. I'll go watch the exile in secret to be sure she left."
She dipped her head and left.

OOC: Wow. This is really.. dramatic. owo Yes, Shine, you went a bit far. xD

IC: Deadstar's fur flattened as the warrior left the camp. He glared after Shinepaw. "Oh no you don't, going back to your den. You can help the other apprentices with the elders for the next two moons, for speaking to your deputy and leader like that," he ordered coldly. "And I will hold off your medicine cat ceremony." He spun around and stormed into his den, not saying a word to Silversoul. He collapsed into his bed, misery washing over his fury. "Why did I have to be leader, Goldenstar?" he pleaded, knowing it was pointless. "It hurts."

Shinepaw hissed. She was a medicine cat, and she had been training for moons to be a full medicine cat. That was it, she had had it. She wasnt going to listen to him anymore. Her leader was now an equal.


Occ- Poor shine. XDD And yea, I dont mind waiting. :P

OOC: Actually, I can make you an MC now, if you like. We need one badly. :3 Then we are also free for an MCA, since Lil isn't active enough.

Occ- Yayness:D ok, that works out. Just tell me when to post in the topic.3.

OOC: Sorry Shine!

IC: As told by her mentor Silversoul, she went infront of the medicine cat's den waiting for Flamepaw to join her on gaurd duety.

Occ- Lol. Its okay. :P

Stormpaw watched as his former mentor ran into the deeper forest "I think she deserved it because even with revenge she doesn't need to kill turning up breaking the warrior code."he meowed

occ- next gather. all of thunderclan will be shocked. because Metalshard is still in the forest, as a riverclan warrior >:D