Warrior Clan Cats

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Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Clan/Rank : Windclanwarrior
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PostSubject: Honeykitpawheart's design   Honeykit\paw\heart's design EmptyWed 29 Jun 2011 - 12:24

:omgonoez!Tom or She-Cat: She cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s): graystripe, firestar, bluestar, etc.

Familiarity with the series:she has the power of every cat combined so basically she is the best @ hunting, battling, etc. and she is related to heatherpaw

Appearance: a golden cat with amber eyes she has a scar over her left eye but she can still open it and she has really long fur

Personality: Happy! she always tries to impress the boys to seek her mate but sometimes when you get her ticked off she'll have a bad temper

Origins: idk

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): She hooked her claws into the bark she was trying to impress some toms and what after felt like a moon she got to the top

Secret Word (In rules!):: honeyheart12347

Clan: Windclan

Name: honeykit\paw\heart
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PostSubject: Re: Honeykit\paw\heart's design   Honeykit\paw\heart's design EmptyWed 29 Jun 2011 - 18:19

Hey, Honeyheart222! I can see you're new to WCC! Welcome! I'm here to give you some tips on your creation.

For Familiarity with the series, it means how many books you've read or you've read up to which book in the warriors series.

Origins is where you were born, who your parents are, or you can just say 'Pure blood WindClan.' :3

The secret word is a word somewhere in the rules, so you have to read all the rules to find it. ;)

Your RP sample is okay, but here's how it could be improved: (Some people on here can get annoyed if you don't RP correctly, so try to use proper spelling and grammar. ;3 )

Your's: She hooked her claws into the bark she was trying to impress some toms and what after felt like a moon she got to the top

Improved: Honeyheart hooked her claws into the bark of the tree she was climbing. She was trying to impress some toms who were watching her. After what felt like a moon, she finally reached the top.


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