Warrior Clan Cats

The future's in your paws. Shape it well.

Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Rainy

Rainy


Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
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Age : 27

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PostSubject: Normal Review .3.   Normal Review .3. EmptySun 20 Feb 2011 - 0:53
Just give me feedback on my story. :) I totally got the idea from my shower (don't ask XD), and now it's going to become a major motion picture!! (Yus, I have big dreams sometimes.) Soooo, what'd ya think?
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Jay


Taurus Tiger
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Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: Normal Review .3.   Normal Review .3. EmptySun 20 Feb 2011 - 0:57
That was great! :D Wonderfully written! ^^ I enjoyed the fact that she was talking more directly to the reader, something very unique.

I rate it, a 9.2/10 :3

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Rainy

Rainy


Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27

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PostSubject: Re: Normal Review .3.   Normal Review .3. EmptySun 20 Feb 2011 - 1:00
Awesome!! :D

It's kinda like in Avatar (with blue peoples), where Jake has a video log that he makes every night. That's what she's doing; her Dad wants her to, just so one day she can look back and learn from her mistakes.
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Sleepy

Sleepy


Clan/Rank : RiverClan
Capricorn Tiger
Number of posts : 9738
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: Normal Review .3.   Normal Review .3. EmptySun 20 Feb 2011 - 3:06
Yeah, it brings more of a connection to the character. Very well written.

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