A week after SunningRocks

A few weeks after the Battle Of SunningRocks, Burnsorrow couldn't move his body while the others chatted in camp. He couldn't move, couldn't think or do anything else. He sat there mindlessly, awake. But not awake. Everything melted away, and a bright light appeared before him. He noticed he was standing again. He was walking towards the light. The tunnel he was walking through disappeared behind him as he looked into the clouds. In the clouds he saw Snowpaw, Windtooth, Foxspark, Brightfire, Breezekit, Hollowpaw. They all stared at him and smiled. He stared right back at them. Suddenly everything froze. He couldn't move anywhere, real life or Starclan.

OOC: It cant, Pine is still a apprentice in this and the kits aren't born yet. But your at there birth...die in a diffrent topic, or this aftermath could be a couple weeks after the real battle.

OoC: What can't? I already left... xD

OOC:Can this be a couple weeks after though, but you suffered from it for a while

OoC: Okay, I changed the first post.

Mudpuddle walked towards Burnsorrow with a mouse, "Hey Burn...." Mudpuddle paused his friend was laying lifeless. His mouth dropped and the mouse fell out. "BURNSORROW" Mudpuddle yowled loud enough for every cat in the clan to here.

Burnsorrow smiled at the cats in the clouds, they were his friends. He turned towards the muddy tunnel to hear the call from his friend. He didn't know which way to go. He didn't know which way was correct.

Pinespirit heard the yowl of Mudpuddle. She rushed over. "What's wrong?" she mewed, looking down at Burnsorrow. "Burnsorrow? Are you OK? Burnsorrow??"

For the first time in Mudpuddles life, he actually cried. Lionkit ranover and mewed "What is t daddy" "Go stand near mommy" Mudpuddle meowed.

Burnsorrow walked closer to the cats in the clouds, only to turn and hear the familiar scream of his friend, Pinespirit. He ran down the tunnel and woke back up, looking at a blury image of Pinespirit. He smiled at his two friends. "Remember this, Starclan is a beautiful place with all the old friends you know and love. When you die don't be afraid... it's... a... very.... comfor....ting... ho-m-e." Burnsorrow said, as his last breaths faded. He left. He was gone.

Pinespirit stared down at Burnsorrow. "No, wait, Burnsorrow!" she cried. She shook him. He wasn't breathing. "Don't leave us!" She curled her tail around Lionkit. Tears trailed down her eyes. Slowly, she sank down, and laid her head by Burnsorrow. "He's not gone," she mewed, "he's not dead. He can't be. He's my FRIEND!"

Lionkit watched is parents cry "Mommy, daddy why are you crying?"

Burnsorrow sighed. He was gone. That was his last breath. He no longer withheld a pulse, or a breath.

Mudpuddle meowed to his son "Rember the warrior that I said was stocking us, the other day. But I was joking." "Wes" Lionkit mewed. "He is gone, he just went to Starclan" Mudpuddle meowed. Lionkit gasped tha a tear rolled down his cheek, he didnt know him but he was gone

Burnsorrow's last sign of life was an alligator tear drop rolling down his face.