Warrior Clan Cats
The future's in your paws. Shape it well.Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
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Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB)
Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice
Number of posts : 1565
| | Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sun 22 Jan 2017 - 7:57 | |
| I think so but I think it was Mistyfoot ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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| | | | Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon.
Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure"
 
Number of posts : 2850
Age : 22
| | Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sun 22 Jan 2017 - 8:12 | |
| ah okay. ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
| | | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB)
Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice
Number of posts : 1565
| | Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sun 22 Jan 2017 - 8:21 | |
| Alrighty ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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| | | | Jughead
Characters : Falconpaw(Rowan), Hawkswoop(Diesel) Morningfog, Bat,Lightningstrike,Glass,Pepper, Webtail, Harepaw, Robinflight, Pinepaw, Clearkit
 
Number of posts : 2907
Age : 21
| | Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sun 22 Jan 2017 - 11:06 | |
| Ooh.. critiques! (I need one soon)
There are a few things that bother me. The extra fur that you put on Scourge, past the cheekbone? Cut it down a bit. Perspective could use a little fixing too, make sure you've got your pov source in the sketch to reference. This is crucial for the dynamic poses you chose. (Very ambitious, nice!) Firestar's chest sems to wide, check a reference to make sure and, to make his expression better, show the whites of his eyes. Cats only show them when extremely angry or scared.
Most of all, avoid the airbrush tool (used for the blood) Look up a tutorial on painting blood digitally, give it shine. Otherwise it looks like you spilled powder on them. ______________________________________   #LEAFYALSOSINNED-Bun Don't be afraid to PM me if you want me in your plot, I'll most likely say yes! Things to look for: Look closely at Pepper's text color, it changes to a lighter color as her plot progresses! Any topic that affects a cross between Bat and Pepper will have something to do with fire. Morningfog will occasionally have a topic that relates to mornings. These may or may not be important. It's mostly just for fun. |
| | | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB)
Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice
Number of posts : 1565
| | Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sun 22 Jan 2017 - 11:16 | |
| Alright thanks for the critique I'll definitely fix it. ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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| | | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB)
Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice
Number of posts : 1565
| | Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sun 22 Jan 2017 - 20:20 | |
| New drawing I did of a fox  ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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