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Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 16:00 | |
| So this is a drawing I'm obviously still working on and for the sake of those who don't do blood I am going to put the picture in a spoiler tab. But I'm still working on it and would like opinions and Critiques despite me still working on it - Spoiler:
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| | | Maple Former Staff
Characters : *Dustcloud {D}, *Blazeflight {B}, *Silentstrike {Sil}, *Gustpuddle {G}, *Swiftflight {Sw}, *Fennelpaw {Fn}, *Jaysong {Ja}, *Fallowlight {Fa}, *Fern {Fe}, *Brackenberry {Br}, *Ivystar {Iv}, *Specklekit {Sp}, *Beanheart {Be}, *Freckleface {Fr}, Briarthorn {Br}, *Eris {E}, *Hyacinthia {Hy}, *Otterdance {Ot}, Nightbird {Ni}, *Olivepaw {Ol}, Smudgekit {Sm} Clan/Rank : Tier Five SkyClan Warrior {Br}, Tier Two SkyClan Warrior {Ni}, WindClan Kit {Sm} Number of posts : 4836 Gender : they/them or username :) Age : 19
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 16:31 | |
| Its great! But less cats gathering might be better, as there were only a few on the patrol. I do like it very much though!
EDIT: Question: Why is Swift wearing a collar? ______________________________________ ♛ Site Baby Sister ♛ | Briarthorn | Nightbird | Smudgekit | | T5 SkC Warrior | T2 SkC Warrior | WC Kit | |
| | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 17:06 | |
| ? This is a picture of Tigerstar's death ... Lol but I'm glad you think its great ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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| | | Maple Former Staff
Characters : *Dustcloud {D}, *Blazeflight {B}, *Silentstrike {Sil}, *Gustpuddle {G}, *Swiftflight {Sw}, *Fennelpaw {Fn}, *Jaysong {Ja}, *Fallowlight {Fa}, *Fern {Fe}, *Brackenberry {Br}, *Ivystar {Iv}, *Specklekit {Sp}, *Beanheart {Be}, *Freckleface {Fr}, Briarthorn {Br}, *Eris {E}, *Hyacinthia {Hy}, *Otterdance {Ot}, Nightbird {Ni}, *Olivepaw {Ol}, Smudgekit {Sm} Clan/Rank : Tier Five SkyClan Warrior {Br}, Tier Two SkyClan Warrior {Ni}, WindClan Kit {Sm} Number of posts : 4836 Gender : they/them or username :) Age : 19
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 17:24 | |
| ooo, i thought it was Hazels death.... Then in that case, its perfect! Its really funny tho bc swift is black, blaze is the color of the colored in cat running forwards, an hazel probs would've been that color with all of the blood. XD ______________________________________ ♛ Site Baby Sister ♛ | Briarthorn | Nightbird | Smudgekit | | T5 SkC Warrior | T2 SkC Warrior | WC Kit | |
| | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 17:44 | |
| Lol great and actually all of it but Hazel would mach the characters hazel was white furred she cat with light cream patches lol
Also just finished another character in this ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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| | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 17:54 | |
| ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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| | | Maple Former Staff
Characters : *Dustcloud {D}, *Blazeflight {B}, *Silentstrike {Sil}, *Gustpuddle {G}, *Swiftflight {Sw}, *Fennelpaw {Fn}, *Jaysong {Ja}, *Fallowlight {Fa}, *Fern {Fe}, *Brackenberry {Br}, *Ivystar {Iv}, *Specklekit {Sp}, *Beanheart {Be}, *Freckleface {Fr}, Briarthorn {Br}, *Eris {E}, *Hyacinthia {Hy}, *Otterdance {Ot}, Nightbird {Ni}, *Olivepaw {Ol}, Smudgekit {Sm} Clan/Rank : Tier Five SkyClan Warrior {Br}, Tier Two SkyClan Warrior {Ni}, WindClan Kit {Sm} Number of posts : 4836 Gender : they/them or username :) Age : 19
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 18:16 | |
| niiiice~ ______________________________________ ♛ Site Baby Sister ♛ | Briarthorn | Nightbird | Smudgekit | | T5 SkC Warrior | T2 SkC Warrior | WC Kit | |
| | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 18:21 | |
| Thanks I'm working on Tallstar at the moment ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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| | | Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon. Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure" Number of posts : 2850 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 18:26 | |
| IT'S AWESOME! HOW DO YOU DO ANATOMY? That's so good! ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
| | | bunjamin
Characters : [P]alestripe; [F]erretwhisker; [T]hornpaw; [Be]epaw; [O]akley; [B]ucky Clan/Rank : loner queen fight me Number of posts : 2356 Age : 19
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 18:32 | |
| *hugs dimmeh while we both pray to get good at anatomy one day* ______________________________________ ❤ b u c k y b e s t b o i❤
LULU'S BODYGUARD FITE ME♘palestripe♘ ♛ferretwhisker♛ ♔thornpaw♔❥beepaw❥ ☻oakley☻ ✰bucky✰ ♘thunderclan yw♘ ♛shadowclan naw♛♔thunderclan apprentice♔❥skyclan apprentice❥☻default rogue☻✰default rogue✰
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| | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 18:37 | |
| I just practices a lot that and a lot of cat stance references usually but this one happened to be luck since I didn't use any references for this lol
Also thanks its taken me almost a week to work on. ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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| | | Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon. Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure" Number of posts : 2850 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 18:42 | |
| worth it! c: it looks great! ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
| | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 18:53 | |
| Yeah also I have a video of what I've already worked on its pretty much speed up like a speedpaint if y'all want I can send a link to it once I have it up in a second ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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| | | Dimmeh
Characters : Blackwhisker and Midge, coming soon. Clan/Rank : "WCC's National Treasure" Number of posts : 2850 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 18:54 | |
| ye~! ______________________________________ Blacktwig/Blackwhisker --- ThunderClan * Fallowstripe --- StarClan * Goatshade --- StarClan * Bouncepaw --- StarClan * Egretkit --- StarClan |
| | | Ember Pheonix
Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB) Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice Number of posts : 1565
| Subject: Re: Can I get opions and Critiques on this Drawing :) Sat 21 Jan 2017 - 18:55 | |
| Alright :) also for the rest of it do you think I should do a join.me or some sort of live recording for the rest of the drawing? ______________________________________ Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc) - Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :
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