Warrior Clan Cats

The future's in your paws. Shape it well.

Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Swifty

Swifty


Clan/Rank : Windclan Leader~Shadowclan Apprentice~Windclan Warrior
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Age : 26

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PostSubject: H&H Fanfiction Commentary and Critique   H&H Fanfiction Commentary and Critique EmptyWed Nov 23, 2011 2:05 pm
Post your criticism here. Please only constructive.

NOTE: I know the first chapter is short, it's not changing. The rest of the chapters will be longer.

What do you guys think?

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First Life: Swiftstar, Windclan leader.
Second Life: Moonsoul (Moonpaw, he died before he became a warrior.)
Third Life: Silverthorn

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