Warrior Clan Cats

The future's in your paws. Shape it well.

Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Ember Pheonix

Ember Pheonix


Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB)
Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice
Number of posts : 1565

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PostSubject: Critique my Drawing?   Critique my Drawing? EmptyThu 1 Dec 2016 - 14:40

Ok so kinda wanna know what you think of a drawing I'm doing. It pretty much close enough to a first attempt via digital cause I've always just drawn in paper.

Critique my Drawing? Night_stream_wip_by_fracturedsnow-daqc7v0

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Critique my Drawing? YJasbDO
                     

Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc)

Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :

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Ice

Ice


Characters : Fuzzface, Curlyfluff, Sweetheart, Molehill, Bugpaw
Clan/Rank : (F)WC/T5, (C)TC/T5, (S)TC/T3, (M)WC/T3 Deputy, (B)WC/App
Libra Dragon
Number of posts : 5968
Gender : F
Age : 24

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PostSubject: Re: Critique my Drawing?   Critique my Drawing? EmptyThu 1 Dec 2016 - 18:04

Wow, nice! For a first-timer at digital, it's looking good!

If you are looking to make this pic a realistic sort of drawing... a suggestion I have is to make the sides of the face not so angular, for cats simply don't have that sort of face shape (I.E. make it more curved). But if it's your style, then I'd say roll with it, 'cause it's looking pretty nice so far :D

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 WindClan Deputy  

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Jughead

Jughead


Characters : Falconpaw(Rowan), Hawkswoop(Diesel) Morningfog, Bat,Lightningstrike,Glass,Pepper, Webtail, Harepaw, Robinflight, Pinepaw, Clearkit
Cancer Horse
Number of posts : 2907
Age : 22

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PostSubject: Re: Critique my Drawing?   Critique my Drawing? EmptyThu 1 Dec 2016 - 21:08

As Ice said, it's pretty good for a first time. Just remember that the highlights are coming from a light source and wouldn't mirror each other in the eyes.

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#LEAFYALSOSINNED-Bun

Don't be afraid to PM me if you want me in your plot, I'll most likely say yes!

Things to look for:

Look closely at Pepper's text color, it changes to a lighter color as her plot progresses!

Any topic that affects a cross between Bat and Pepper will have something to do with fire.

Morningfog will occasionally have a topic that relates to mornings. These may or may not be important. It's mostly just for fun.
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Ember Pheonix

Ember Pheonix


Characters : Hazelpaw(deceased), Ambernose(AN)(deceased)) ,Batpaw(mia)(BS), Jaysong(JS)(deceased), Jubilance(MIA), Lichenfang(LF), Cinderfrost( CF), Heathershade(HS)(deceased), Tawnypool(TP)(deceased),Frostpaw(FB)
Clan/Rank : Ambernose SC warrior ||||||| Jaysong: TC senior warrior |||||| Lichenpaw TC apprentice ||||||||||||| Cinderpaw TC apprentice ||||||| Heatherpaw WC apprentice
Number of posts : 1565

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PostSubject: Re: Critique my Drawing?   Critique my Drawing? EmptyFri 2 Dec 2016 - 4:25

Alrighty thanks for telling me :) I actually finished coloring the picture and everything my iternet and stuff went out last night though before I could post it.
Critique my Drawing? Nightstream_finished_by_fracturedsnow-daqe88y

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Critique my Drawing? YJasbDO
                     

Lichenfang(Elder)(tc) ||||Pantherclaw(young warrior)(tc)||||Amberpaw (apprentice)(sc)||| Sablekit(kit)(TC)|||| Frozenpaw(apprentice)(skc)||Snowpaw (apprentice)(tc)

Jaysong Of Thunderclan(Frost's biological mother) and Frost/frostkit to be of Thunderclan(Jaysong's only daughter) :

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Kem

Kem


Characters : Robinpaw, Briarkit
Clan/Rank : (R)Apprentice (b)kit
Pisces Snake
Number of posts : 67
Age : 23

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PostSubject: Re: Critique my Drawing?   Critique my Drawing? EmptySat 3 Dec 2016 - 4:32

The head is drawn quite well but the eyes seem a bit close together and cats do have quite big eyes. I also would not recommend shading with an airbrush or the burn tool. I think this video might help


Other than that it's rather well drawn so keep at it!

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Robinkit
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Jughead

Jughead


Characters : Falconpaw(Rowan), Hawkswoop(Diesel) Morningfog, Bat,Lightningstrike,Glass,Pepper, Webtail, Harepaw, Robinflight, Pinepaw, Clearkit
Cancer Horse
Number of posts : 2907
Age : 22

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PostSubject: Re: Critique my Drawing?   Critique my Drawing? EmptySat 3 Dec 2016 - 5:20

Make sure that the eyes have that signature sharpness and don't just go straight across. Cats have very almond shaped eyes. I use this tutorial a lot when I get stuck. http://stock-heil.deviantart.com/art/Cat-Faces-Tutorial-394870133

I'd also suggest checking the muzzle size and proportions the placement of it is fine.

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Critique my Drawing? Siggy11
Critique my Drawing? Otp_ot10



#LEAFYALSOSINNED-Bun

Don't be afraid to PM me if you want me in your plot, I'll most likely say yes!

Things to look for:

Look closely at Pepper's text color, it changes to a lighter color as her plot progresses!

Any topic that affects a cross between Bat and Pepper will have something to do with fire.

Morningfog will occasionally have a topic that relates to mornings. These may or may not be important. It's mostly just for fun.
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