Quick Check...but long post

Dispare sneared, clearly enjoying the moment of his oppninets downfall that he didn't feel the pain in g his paws. He only felt power surging threw his vains. But it wasn't enough, he wanted more...

Gracekit pulled her legs forward scrabbling at him. The pain on her chest(?) was making it hard to breath. With his lust, I don't know, but I guess she was bleeding.

Envyshadow snarled and tackled Dispare from the side, knocking him off the small kit, bareing his teeth. "Stay away from her!" he snarled. How dare Dispare attack his denmate, and a kit! Envyshadow was pissed off. He got off Disapre before he could attack and pawed his ear "You have a place, stay in it!" he growled. He walked to Gracekit and licked her ear "You ok." he asked, still agitated. If Dispare thought he could get away with attacking Gracekit, who says he wouldn't think he could attack Honey, or Bubble....Moonpaw, or himself. He sat back down and looked at Dispare. "What was that!" he demanded.

"I think so." she meowed after catching her breath.

Dispare narrowed his eyes at his mentor,"why should I! All you do is hide us in the shadow of the world and tell us what to believe!" he yowled with rage sheathing and unsheathing his claws itching to rip them down Envyshadow's pelt

Envyshadow lashed his tail and smiled, circling Dispare. "You have grown strong." he mewed "And you show the craving for power, like a real Dark forest warrior." he smiled. He liked that Dispare was so strong, but was it safe to keep him here, if he threatens the others. "What is it you desire?" he asked. "Do you want to leave and face leafbare alone?" "Or do you want to stay?" he stopped in front of him "Because theratening your denmates will not be tollorated!"

Dispare had never thought about LeafBare,"I believe I can mangage," he meowed

Envyshadow nodded eyes narrowed "If you do not wish to stay, then you can leave!" he said coldly. "Espesially after a disply like that!"

"That was only a glimps of what is to come..." the small black cat with a white right paw sneered,"you'll see more of me, the whole forest will!" he said rising his voice to a vowl

Envyshadow smirked "I honnor your bravery, my apprentice." he dipped his head in respect. "I await to see what your plans shall turn into." his eyes were burnin happily. He had succsessfully trained an apprentice worthy of the dark forest. Now the clans would feel his wrath. If only he would stay. "Promise not to harm the young ones and you may stay, but I understand if you want to venture forth alone." he mewed "But it won't be easy, hear my words." he narrowed his eyes. "Alone in this forest isn't the best statigy."

occ- Im debating weather Envy should be happy or pissed off XD sorry if he looks likes hes in mood swings

Forcing herself not to sneer something mean she held her tongue. I don't care where it goes. "I don't care about power, nor the Dark Forest." Gracekit stuck her silver muzzle in the air.

Envyshadow looked at Gracekit "Good, you don't need or have to...yet." he mewed smileing at her. Keep your innocence as long as you can...well...not to long he thought.

Dispare was turning away as Envyshadow spoke,"who said I was going to the forest?" he meowed. He walked over to Moonpaw and gave her a lick on the head,"it was good to train alongside you, Moonpaw," he said to the she-cat looking into her sightless eyes, and with that he bound away towards the forest...

OOC: I'm going to make a topic at the River and Dispare can be confronted by some clan cats for like the first time eva! :D lolz

Envyshadow crossed his paws "Sad to see him go....." he said under his breath. He looked back at Moonpaw who is probolly not posting anymore "Anything else?" he asked.

occ- Mossy, you mind seeing whats taking the others 3 years to post?

ooc- I've PM'd Bloo about watching, she didn't want to. Snakee ish in hostpital, remember?