Warrior Clan Cats

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Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Am I a good writer?
1) Work on your spelling
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2) Work on your grammar
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3) don't fix anything, you did great
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4) It was much too violent
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5) It was not violent enough
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6) Fix the plot
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7) It was alright, I'm just not into that genre of books
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8) you didn't do very well
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9) you should NOT be a book writer!
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Sun
Former Staff
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Sun


Characters : Turtlefur, Goldenstar, Lynxpetal, Creekpaw, Lightningpaw
Clan/Rank : RiverClan Warrior, WindClan Leader, SkyClan Queen RiverClan Apprentice, WindClan Apprentice
Sagittarius Tiger
Number of posts : 8190
Gender : it
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Did I prove the world wrong?   Did I prove the world wrong? EmptyTue 7 Jun 2011 - 9:31
What the title says. Vote. If you dunno what I'm talking about, look at 'I am going to prove the world wrong'.

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Sun // Living Characters // Deceased Characters
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Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900
Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood
Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue
Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e
Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682
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Thistle (Angel)

Thistle (Angel)


Clan/Rank : T:WC Kit R:TC Kit S:SC Kit
Libra Cat
Number of posts : 2040
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: Did I prove the world wrong?   Did I prove the world wrong? EmptyTue 7 Jun 2011 - 9:55
That was... EPIC. I'm sorry if people think you should forget art, because you're epic at that too. Earn a living from 'em both!
At least continue the story, pleasE?

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~Angel~

Hey Thar. No kitties lurking in here ;D:


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PostSubject: Re: Did I prove the world wrong?   Did I prove the world wrong? EmptyTue 7 Jun 2011 - 9:55
The writeings great but the plot isnt. Try putting in a better starting hook and let the reader know more in the begeining, because otherwise they wouldnt continue reading. Besides that the writeing itself was EPIC. Yeah im a writing critic...xD


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Thistle (Angel)

Thistle (Angel)


Clan/Rank : T:WC Kit R:TC Kit S:SC Kit
Libra Cat
Number of posts : 2040
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: Did I prove the world wrong?   Did I prove the world wrong? EmptyTue 7 Jun 2011 - 9:57
I liked the plot very much. But it's your opinion on that. Not mine.

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~Angel~

Hey Thar. No kitties lurking in here ;D:


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Sun
Former Staff
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Sun


Characters : Turtlefur, Goldenstar, Lynxpetal, Creekpaw, Lightningpaw
Clan/Rank : RiverClan Warrior, WindClan Leader, SkyClan Queen RiverClan Apprentice, WindClan Apprentice
Sagittarius Tiger
Number of posts : 8190
Gender : it
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: Did I prove the world wrong?   Did I prove the world wrong? EmptyTue 7 Jun 2011 - 10:49
Oh, thanks. It's really only just starting, Metal, so if you just keep reading, you'll understand. Plus,I added the second chapter.

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Sun // Living Characters // Deceased Characters
Did I prove the world wrong? 713E5771-31B2-4EA8-B75F-EC3A67DB4C32
Turtlefur || Tom || RiverClan T5 Warrior || Requirements || #cc9900
Goldenstar || She-cat || WindClan T5 Leader || Requirements || burlywood
Lynxpetal || She-cat || SkyClan Queen || darkblue
Lightningpaw || Tom || WindClan Apprentice || #dfd47e
Creekpaw || She-cat || RiverClan Apprentice || #4c5682
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Clan/Rank : ThunderClan Kit
Scorpio Rat
Number of posts : 3521
Age : 28

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PostSubject: Re: Did I prove the world wrong?   Did I prove the world wrong? EmptyTue 7 Jun 2011 - 10:51
I liked it.. .but don't say 'stinky old boring books!' because just a btw, Warriors is a book......... and books are great. >n>

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PostSubject: Re: Did I prove the world wrong?   Did I prove the world wrong? EmptyTue 7 Jun 2011 - 16:24
books are wonderful, I love writing so much. That's very ture Sun. I guess it just wouldn't be my sorta book because I didn't care for it :D
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