| | Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 |  |
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| Ya like it? | | Yes | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | No | | 38% | [ 3 ] | | Kinda | | 13% | [ 1 ] | | Not that much | | 49% | [ 4 ] |
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Mossy
 
Number of posts : 5271
Age : 24
| | Subject: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 15:02 | |
| Ya like? ______________________________________ |
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Jay
 
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 16:23 | |
| I don't like it. It really has horrible grammar, and seems like a rip off of Ftero's story. It is really unoriginal. ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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Mossy
Number of posts : 5271
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 16:26 | |
| Well,not my fault in fourth grade sucks! ______________________________________ |
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Jay
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 16:29 | |
| ....I honestly wrote very well in fourth grade. Your argument is invalid :P ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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Ebby
Characters : Stormsong, Doekit
Clan/Rank : ShadowClan Arborist; Mindflayer Enthusiast
 
Number of posts : 6705
Gender : She / Her
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 16:35 | |
| I... like it... in some ways... x3 ______________________________________ |
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Mossy
Number of posts : 5271
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 16:40 | |
| Not if youve gone to myschool.Youu talk your yelled at.Roaches in your food.Have to edit your own writings so yeah I have bad grammar and don't pay that much attention yet STILL get good grades. ______________________________________ |
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Moon
Clan/Rank : ThunderClan Kit
Number of posts : 3521
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 16:49 | |
| Roaches in your food. . .? e.o that's repulsive and so is your grammar. ______________________________________ |
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Jay
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 16:52 | |
| You are obviously lying. Your school is completely fine, but you most likely slack off... ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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Mossy
Number of posts : 5271
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 16:59 | |
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Moon
Clan/Rank : ThunderClan Kit
Number of posts : 3521
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 17:02 | |
| n00b parents... ______________________________________ |
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Mossy
Number of posts : 5271
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 17:06 | |
| no Ingelside F***ING SUCKS ______________________________________ |
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Jay
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 17:43 | |
| ...i guess they make them Wear Uniforms and make them learn a lot, and for that, she hates the school. ______________________________________ i used to administrate but the man tore me down
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Ebby
Characters : Stormsong, Doekit
Clan/Rank : ShadowClan Arborist; Mindflayer Enthusiast
Number of posts : 6705
Gender : She / Her
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 17:45 | |
| Okay, this is straying a little from just "Comments". >:c How about we all stfu right about nao? ______________________________________ |
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Jay
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 17:52 | |
| I'll try, I'll try :c
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Mossy
Number of posts : 5271
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: Commets for Martin Opal,age 12 Sat 4 Jun 2011 - 19:19 | |
| Okay..I have to do what meddies say.Escpaicily ones that are peacefull. ______________________________________ |
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