Re: Review for Pokemon: Legends Come Together

I'm doing a Re-Review for my fanfic.

My story is based of five trainers' perspectives, namely the Sinnoh Region's Champion, Twila. I know, I messed up the plot line, having Jayson come first, when Twila was supposed to. Each trainer has captured a legendary Pokemon from their own region and is Champion. The plot has taken a pretty good launch for the first two and a half chapters, in my opinion. What do you think? Critiques are allowed, but please, no negative comments. :laa:

My only problem is the capturing of Legendaries. In my idea, there are only one Legendary of each type, ONE Dialga, ONE Celebi, ONE Moltres, ONE Reshiram. . . You get it? And I don't think they should be caught. xD; Because, unlike other Pokemon, they'll surely outlive the Trainer, and still be confined to a Pokeball. Just look at Ninetales, the longest living non-Legendary. She was still in her Pokeball after a couple hundred years.

Other than that, and the fact that some idiot has the ambition to capture all teh legendz (lol) I think it's awesome :3 You should make trainer card. I want to see your protaginist's Pokemon :3

I only brought Legends into it because it's based on them. They didn't start off with them. However, I like to hear comments. :D Thank you for your contribution.