Sunpaw's Twisting Nightmare

All was quiet. Sunpaw was lying in the grass. When she opened her eyes, she saw how gorgeous it was-
She was by a sparkling pond of fresh water that fireflies danced on, and the luciously green grass swayed in the wind. In the dark night, the stars above twinkled peculiarly as they danced in the twighlight. She sat up; She could feel and move her leg again. The cool breeze felt good on her fur. The soft wind suddenly turned harsh; they were etched of warnings, a dark presence surrounding her. The wind swirled and swirled, getting stronger and stronger by the second; It almost sucked her in. A bunch of wind picked up the water as it floated over the pond. The water was sucked up into the twirling mass and soon formed a whirlwind of water. A shape of a dark and evil cat formed, lunging at her. She ran, fear-scent covering her. In a heavy patch of trees, she thought she was safe. But she soon smelled an alarmingly familiar scent. She ran on, until suddenly the ground opened. She found herself falling into the dark, dreadful emptiness.

OCC: Is this what's happening while you fell asleep in 'Sunpaw's Possible Death'?

OOC: yes

OCC: So...can I post here?

"Sunpaw!" He screamed. "What's wrong?"

Sunpaw hit hard earth. She let a moan of pain- her second dream to actually hurt.
She was frightened suddenly by a bone-chilling laugh. She looked up to see her gravest enemy.
"Deathheart!"

ooc: Awww.. my position was stolen! I USED to e greatest enemy, now im soo much better'

ic: "Don't touch her!" He hissed.

OCC: Okay, I did.

IC: Deadpaw awoke in the same grassy field, a soft breeze wafting around his fur. He froze in sudden alarm, as darkness closed around him. Deadpaw soon found himself running in a shadowy forest, and a familiar scent caught his nostrils. Sunpaw! This must be her nightmare! He raced onward, until the ground lurched beneath him, and he too, was sucked into darkness. Through the violent twisting shadows, he spotted a ginger pelt. "Sunpaw?" he yowled, and lost sight of her. Then he spotted it. A deathly looking cat. And it was looking hungrily at Sunpaw. He also saw Brambleflame. "Who is that?"

He ran over to sunpaw, trying to protect her.

Deadpaw padded next to Brambleflame, claws unsheathed. "Who is that?" his hissed again.

OOC: NO you werent, you were my ARCH enemy, not GREATEST

IC:
"Fools!"
he said, his deep voice rumbling.
"I care not for you. Here is my subject!"

"A cat that haunted her dream ago." he hissed. "I don't care for you either! All i care is that you DO NOT TOUCH HER!"

Deadpaw frowned, and drew back his teeth in a snarl. He didn't know this cat, but he hated him already.

"I am not warning you. I am threatening you! I will kill you."

Deadpaw continued to bristle. "I will fight with you. Her nightmare is all of ours."