Talking to Brambleflame

Featherpaw went hunting by herself, and told herself she would go look for mice at the sandy hollow, but soon she found her paws carrying her to the Thunderpath.
"Mouse-brained!"
She said to herself under her breath, but didnt turn around. She soon found the nasty scented black stretch of Thunderpath. But she didnt go onto it, not after what happened with Blackpaw. She only waited on the ThunderClan side, ducking into the bushes when a monster appreared. But she was hoping to see one warrior in spefics.

redpelt was walking around whem mhe sented thunderclan " who is their"

"what are you doing, featherpaw?"
asked Sunpaw as she stalked out of some bushes.

Brambleflame was walking around the Thunderpath, when he scented ThundeRCLAN.

redpelt saw brambleflame " greetings brambleflame, i smell thunderclan what about u"

Feather jumped into the bushes, her pelt unnoticable with the dim light cast of by the sun. it was a rainyish day.
"Furball Sunpaw! You are ruining this!"
She hissed under her breathe. But about three other cats had seen her so she came back out of the bushes.
"Hi, um I came to talk to Brambleflame. About what happened here. She said pointing a paw to the bloody puddle where Blackpaw had once sat.

"I don't want to talk about it," His eyes flashed angirly.

what...?"
Sunpaw was confused. ruining what?

Featherpaw looked at him sympathetically.
"I just wanted to make sure he's ok. Im sorry though it was my fault."
She said growling when he eyes watered, but she steal held his charcoal and burning ember gaze.

redpelt looked like he might go ank kill featherpaw

Sunpaw saw his look.
"touch her and die!"
she hissed.

"Featherpaw, you touched Blackpaw, and i almost killed you, Sunpaw you better watch yourself.." He glared.

"I dont need to be watching anything but my prey!"
she hissed.

"And my claws that are about to sink through your throat!" He hissed.

"And MY teeth will be in YOUR throught!"