First time at the moonstones

Thunderpaw came up to the moonstones.Please let me be a good warrior someday He said out loud to Starclan

"Hey, what are you doing here?" Graypaw said as he walked toward Thunderpaw. "I remember you from that Kit gathering Mistpelt set up. Your Thunderpaw now right?"

Thunderpaw then jumped,Startled by Graypaw."Oh,you are......aaaaaa.....Silverpaw..........no Graypaw,I remember you. Thunderpaw said

"Yea..." Graypaw meowed awkwardly because the other apprentice had such a hard time remembering his name. "I just decided to see Moonstones for the first time, since i've never been there before." Graypaw meowed looking around. "Although I had to go through WindClan territory, it was weird being out in the open like that, and thinking back, I guess I shouldn't of crossed the border just to explore... Although that means you must have went through their border two."

"Yeah but i hid in the trees and walked silently,Shadowclan apprentices are supposed to know how to sneak as quiet as a mouse" Thunderpaw said.Suddenly his expression changed."Speaking of mouse im HUNGRY!" Thunderpaw meowed.

"Me two! Wait here." Graypaw meowed. He walked off a little intil he smelled some prey. He then saw a mouse scuring along a clump of grass. Graypaw dropped into the Hunters Crouch, silently, he pawed his way to the mouse. At the last second the Mouse noticed Graypaw, but it was to late. Graypaw was already jumping over the mouse, and dispatched it quickly. Graypaw padded back to Thunderpaw with the mouse in his mouth. "Do you want some?" Graypaw said as he dropped the mouse in front of Thunderpaw.

"Sorry but i need to hunt on my own" Thunerpaw said. Suddenly his ears twitched."I smell rabbits,and i can also hear them so they are close!" Thunderpaw said to Grawpaw

"Alright right then. Go get the rabbit before it gets away." Graypaw meowed as he started to eat the mouse.

Thunderpaw silently paced to the bushes nearby.Then he waited a little,and ,He leaped into the bush.Five seconds later,He was dragging a rabbit in his jaws to the moonstones.

"Good job!" Graypaw meowed as he finished eating his mouse. "Well I guess I should be heading off to my own territory. Bye!" Graypaw meowed as he started walking back to WindClan territory to get back to ThunderClan.

"Bye,see ya soon!" Thunderpaw said waving his paw.

Graypaw waved his tail to show that he noticed and then he was gone.

Thunderpaw looked down."Guess i should go back to my territory!" He meowed

Jaypaw wrote:

"Yeah but i hid in the trees and walked silently,Shadowclan apprentices are supposed to know how to sneak as quiet as a mouse" Thunderpaw said.Suddenly his expression changed."Speaking of mouse im HUNGRY!" Thunderpaw meowed.

that is so much like a part in the warriors book (but i forget which book)

ooc:um....bluesky,you have to create a cat and join a clan(see mistpelt for details)and your not a warrior,if you read the books you can start as an apprentice.otherwise your a kit.