so i had an idea..

So basically,
Swanpaw, my Skyclan apprentice, is going/will be blind. She accidentally kills a rogue kit and her self-worth drops greatly. She already had super low self-esteem, due to her blindness, so this will affect her greatly. I kind of want cats to find out about it; not many, just two or three, maybe even four (how they find out is up to you) and just ridicule her for it. Play mean pranks on her, talk behind her back, remind her constantly that she's a murderer and doesn't deserve to be in Skyclan, all that fun stuff. Maybe even attack her, if that suits their personality.

Other cats can notice their behavior and tell them off, maybe Swan and them can even become friends. Up to the bullies, they can either stop the harsh treatment or continue it, but Swan won't really care anymore since she's got people on her side. I doubt anyone will sign up but, it's worth a shot.

Open to improvement and/or more ideas!

Cat(s) who find out and mess with her (Any clan, but preferably Skyclan):
- Beepaw (Skyclan; Bun)
- Hillpaw (Riverclan; Squirrelnose)
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- Open (optional) slot

Cat(s) who help her out (Any clan, they could probably meet during a Gathering if they aren't in SkC): 
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- Wasppaw (Skyclan; Thin)
- Squirrelpaw (Skyclan, Littlestream)
- Mistyrain (Skyclan; Rusk)

Wasp can totally help the child out UvU

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and bee can be a horrible sister and bully her about it <3

I knew Bee was bad news the moment she shoved her out of the nest,,
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I've got two offers:

Rainpaw - meddie, mom was murderer, would see swanpaw's case as entirely an accident and defend her as well as try and help with her with her blindness as well

Boarpaw - full kittypet blood, looks weird (lykoi), knows how it feels to have the guilt of killing a cat, he's been bullied plenty and hates the idea of just watching another cat go through it

Both in tc

They're both pretty lit, but I'm going to go with Boarpaw because he's used to it also, and Swan can relate to him, even if they are in different clans.

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if misty is gonna be there when she kills the rogue kit and then finds out about her blindness and everything, she could be one of the cats who defends swanpaw. i think she would be very protective of her once she got over the rogue killing thing, especially as her mentor.

idk if you wanted just cats her age, or anything, but i thought i'd offer :)

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Now, all we need is bullies :)

Too bad bullies are SkyClan only. If Hill (RC) somehow found out (or just knew she was blind) he would make it his mission to treat her like crow-food.

I'll change it, I just thought Skyclan would be more convenient. If Hill is bold enough, he could sneak over the border while she's alone just to assault her. Just a thought :)

Hill would totally do that.

Nice.
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Blossomheart can help out in Starclan during the moonstone if you like. She is,you know, everyone's mom

I'll definitely consider it.