The Roaring Water Draws Near (Closed for Toy Roblox)

A somewhat long furred bright ginger,gold and black tom jetted forward chasing a furry figure of a vole. Roaringpaw was drawing near to it faster  and faster. The young apprentice oblivious to the fact at how dangerously close he was to the river at SunningRocks. The vole jetted taking a turn and hide in Sunningrocks. Roaringpaw  skidded to a stop and gave a small hiss of annoyance at the loss of the potential prey he could have brought back to camp
Though he started to hear a very slight crumbling sound about the roaring of the river and before the young tom could register what was happening his back hind paw gave way and he went down into the river. He writhed and splashed trying to get out of the moving water. Though having no such luck the Tom's long fur was getting drenched and dragged him under. He was dragged down and swept down the river getting hit by some rock and other things the river pulled past him. One certain rock nailed him on the head knocking him out if not adding to the fact he was starting to drown. He lost conciousness breifly as he was still swept downstream. Though not getting far as he soon washed up a little ways down on shore at Riverclan ' s side of the territory.

OOC: Can I have Golden in here or nah

IC: Heavy paws slammed into marsh, spluttering across gray blurs. Pushing through the clumps of tall reeds, mewls and meows whispered. This is too risky! What am I doing? and What an idiot. I am crazy. I don't know what I'm doing out here alon-- 

Her ears perked up, her instinct telling her to crouch. So she did, but then slowly crawled forward. "Hey, you! Get over here..."

OOC: Can I have Golden in here or nah

IC: Heavy paws slammed into marsh, spluttering across gray blurs. Pushing through the clumps of tall reeds, mewls and meows whispered. This is too risky! What am I doing? and What an idiot. I am crazy. I don't know what I'm doing out here alon-- 

Her ears perked up, her instinct telling her to crouch. So she did, but then slowly crawled forward. "Hey, you! Get over here..."

Ooc sure if you want

Ic:
The tom who still was uncouncious  at the moment didn't hear her at first. Then he started to stir. He blinked his eyes and coughed up some water but didn't move he seemed to be wounded.

A heavy gasp was all that came out. "Hello? Is anyone there?" Trembling, she stepped further. An apprentice! An injured ThunderClan apprentice. "Oh dear! Poor little thing."

Roaringpaw ' s eyes opened and he looked to her but he didn't know where he was what happened or nothing."w..who's there?"the tom asked.

"Salmonstripe, dreary. Are you alright?" She asked in a sweet, gentle tone.

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"Salmonstripe, deary. Are you all right?" Scared him. At his son's voice it caused him to run, gazing over the River with wide, frightened eyes.

"I...I don't know " Roaringpaw mewed. He looked to his flank taking notice of some blood on his soaking wet fur. He was quiet for a long moment before looking to Salmonstripe"i...where am i..... "he asked try to sit up dispite the pain.