Warrior Clan Cats

The future's in your paws. Shape it well.

Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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 MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =)

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PostSubject: MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =)   MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =) EmptyFri 4 Jun 2010 - 20:52

I feel the tears run down my face.
I wish that I could just erase,
the mess I'd broughten to this place.
They tore my heart out,
refused to listen.
Now I'm shedding tears that glisten.
They believed their poisoned lies,
ignored my heartbroke wails and cries.
My Romeo has been forbade,
to come to me and be my aid.
Forbiden to ever see me again,
forbiden to love me,
forbiden to be what we once had been.
The darkness surrounds me,
but I"m learning to cope.
With my small flickering light,
my light of hope.
But what happens the light goes out,
and all I can do is stand there and shout?
What happens when it's just a spark?
Then I'm left all alone in the dark.
With no responce I won't stay around,
next time they see me I"ll be six feet in the ground.
-Deathpaw
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Rainy

Rainy


Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27

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PostSubject: Re: MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =)   MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =) EmptyFri 4 Jun 2010 - 21:36

That really is depressing, but so powerful.
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Leo

Leo


Characters : Leopardheart
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy
Libra Tiger
Number of posts : 6901
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =)   MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =) EmptySat 5 Jun 2010 - 7:35

This is really powerful. Did you write it?

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Goldfish

Goldfish


Clan/Rank : Former ThunderClan Leader
Virgo Cat
Number of posts : 3475
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =)   MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =) EmptySat 5 Jun 2010 - 18:54

Epic! You're really good at these! =D

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Moon

Moon


Clan/Rank : ThunderClan Kit
Scorpio Rat
Number of posts : 3521
Age : 28

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PostSubject: Re: MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =)   MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =) EmptySat 5 Jun 2010 - 20:07

Epicly amazing. (:

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PostSubject: Re: MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =)   MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =) EmptySat 5 Jun 2010 - 21:25

Thank You
@Leopardpaw: of course! otherwise i would've added who wrote it at the bottom
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Leo

Leo


Characters : Leopardheart
Clan/Rank : Thunderclan/Former Deputy
Libra Tiger
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Age : 26

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You're an amazing poem writer, death.

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PostSubject: Re: MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =)   MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =) EmptyWed 9 Jun 2010 - 17:18

Thankez you ^_^
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Bloo

Bloo


Clan/Rank : N/A
Sagittarius Tiger
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Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =)   MORE DEPRESSING POEMS!!! =) EmptyWed 9 Jun 2010 - 19:02

If only you could give these to a proffessional publisher or something. These are very good. :D

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Redfern

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So very menacing and powerful. It reminds me of the song Tourniquet by Evanescence.
I would give you suggestions, but I can't find anything you can improve on at this time. Great job!
~Spiderpelt
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