Warrior Clan Cats

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Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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 My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)

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Light(silver)

Light(silver)


Clan/Rank : Light: Riverclan apprentice Dusk: Rouge/Shadowclan Kit
Leo Horse
Number of posts : 249
Age : 22

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PostSubject: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySat 10 Aug 2013 - 10:24

Ok so I thought about this last night. So I thought that when Lightpaw becomes a senior Warrior (or elder) She becomes insane and kills a kit, almost kills a warrior, and almost kills the leader or something. Then she gets exiled and lives at the abandoned barn  and I haven't figured out the rest. So if this gets approved or whatever I'll need some people that I almost kill and I'll also need some suggestions for what to do after Lightpaw goes to the abandoned barn.

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySat 10 Aug 2013 - 10:39

I guess I should put Patcheye for almost getting killed, she is getting old but I don't want to kill her off until she is really old, of course this needs to be approved I am just letting this out here, and this would be perfect for her death, which would be related. So I wouldn't mind if you attacked and just about kill her.
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Sleepy


Clan/Rank : RiverClan
Capricorn Tiger
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Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySat 10 Aug 2013 - 10:55

There is always one important question that people need to ask themselves when they want to do something extreme like this with their character: is there a reason behind it?

It would make your plot much richer if there was a purpose behind it beyond "she just went crazy." Intentions and goals are needed.

You, as the roleplayer, have the sense to know that Lightpaw/stream would immediately be exiled (if not immediately killed) for such an act. Light would know this too, so I think she would need a reason to do something so horrible and risky.

You should also plan this fully and carefully. It's a very drastic turn, and you'll want to make the most of it if you decide to go through (assuming it is approved sometime down the line, which is not a guarantee).

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Light(silver)

Light(silver)


Clan/Rank : Light: Riverclan apprentice Dusk: Rouge/Shadowclan Kit
Leo Horse
Number of posts : 249
Age : 22

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySat 10 Aug 2013 - 12:04

Ok so how about someone in the dark forest is persuading her to do this. Maybe she wants to get revenge for something, or she wants power or she could accidentally meet up with a cat that is like evil or something and join him/her.

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySat 10 Aug 2013 - 16:57

Lel you could always join Crowclaw and Icestream in their training.

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Light(silver)

Light(silver)


Clan/Rank : Light: Riverclan apprentice Dusk: Rouge/Shadowclan Kit
Leo Horse
Number of posts : 249
Age : 22

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySat 10 Aug 2013 - 17:16

Ya I could. What is Crowclaw trying to do though?(Is he going to try to take over his clan or what)

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Echo


Gemini Dragon
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Age : 24

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySat 10 Aug 2013 - 20:22

For the revenge part, it would probably be because Light had a crush on Duck, but Mint became his mate overall. cx I'd honestly say that Light should try and murder Mint, but Duck stops her. Even so, we do need more Dark Forest characters, but not too much. I suppose this would be a good opportunity to expand on that. However, the best reason I could think of would be a broken heart.

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Ice Cream Zombie


Clan/Rank : |L|Thunderclan/Elder|S|Shadowclan/Young Warrior|C|Windclan/Young Warrior
Number of posts : 1392

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySat 10 Aug 2013 - 22:19

Still, it's a little stretch, and I'm not too fond of Crowclaw coming into play with whatever this is. It sounds like something you just made off the top of your head. There's not a huge reason behind it.

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Light(silver)


Clan/Rank : Light: Riverclan apprentice Dusk: Rouge/Shadowclan Kit
Leo Horse
Number of posts : 249
Age : 22

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySun 11 Aug 2013 - 9:50

I guess i could do what Echo said. It is a good idea. So Lightpaw has a huge crush on Duckstep, Mintcloud becomes his mate, Lightpaw gets mad and tries to kill her, Duckstep stops her, Then I guess Froststar finds out and Lightpaw Gets Exiled or something, and then she wants to get revenge and she lives at the barn and joins up with rouges and does the whole Tigerstar thing (Brings rouges to the clan and wile they are distracted, She sneaks in and tries to kill the leader). I could do that!

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Characters : Murkyriver ♀ | Snowvixen ♀ | Hollowgrove ♀ | Mountainpaw ♀ | Loonkit ♀ ~~ Copper was here
Clan/Rank : Riverclan | Windclan | Shadowclan | Thunderclan
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Gender : She/Her - ash was here :3 and Ro!
Age : 21

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySun 11 Aug 2013 - 11:04

But why?

What is the reason for you wanting to do this? I would first of all have a reason to do it in the first place.

Also, I guess I can volunteer Leafpaw for the first one. I don't mind being a small part, but until it's approved, I'm just volunteering.

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Light(silver)

Light(silver)


Clan/Rank : Light: Riverclan apprentice Dusk: Rouge/Shadowclan Kit
Leo Horse
Number of posts : 249
Age : 22

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My reason is What Echo said, a broken heart. It happens on some TV shows (Some of the ones i watch). Also, It'll give me something to RP about, and every one who is in it.

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Ice Cream Zombie


Clan/Rank : |L|Thunderclan/Elder|S|Shadowclan/Young Warrior|C|Windclan/Young Warrior
Number of posts : 1392

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySun 11 Aug 2013 - 13:09

Light would have to be pretty desperate if he was to get upset enough to kill about a broken heart. My old character, Iceclaw got pretty upset over heartbreak, but even he didn't go 'insane'. He didn't try to kill anyone. He just hated Stormeye for a long time and was always giving him a hard time whenever he could(Or at least that's how the plot planned to go; I had to leave in the middle of it >_>).
But I suppose that was because he was always very loyal to his clan and the Warrior Code. As for Lightstream/paw, stuff could happen that slowly brings her to not trust the clan or code as much leading up to the heartbreak. So already being slightly unstable about rules, she could finally snap due to heartbreak. Also, maybe Mint could get frustrated at her for being jealous and just make Light even more angry that way. You need to think of more than just simple heartbreak as a plot.

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Light(silver)


Clan/Rank : Light: Riverclan apprentice Dusk: Rouge/Shadowclan Kit
Leo Horse
Number of posts : 249
Age : 22

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySun 11 Aug 2013 - 13:53

Maybe Lightpaw goes to tall pines by accident and another cat follows her there and a twoleg comes and tries to feed her and the other cat thinks that Lightpaw is getting food from twolegs, then the cat tells the whole can and Lightpaw gets in trouble and every one stays away from her. Then something bad happens like someone steals a kit and Mint knows that Lightpaw likes Duck so She blames it on Lightpaw to make her look bad and then Lightpaw starts to doubt that her clan likes her and then the heart break happens and then she gets revenge with rouges (I describe it better in my other post.)

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Ice Cream Zombie


Clan/Rank : |L|Thunderclan/Elder|S|Shadowclan/Young Warrior|C|Windclan/Young Warrior
Number of posts : 1392

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySun 11 Aug 2013 - 14:27

Why would her clanmate think she's getting food from a twoleg without actually seeing Lightpaw at the food let alone distrust her enough to run off and gossip about it? Also I don't see why the others would stay away from her; it's not like she has a highly-contagious disease from being near a Twoleg. Speaking of that, why or how would she even be near a random Twoleg? Any smart clan cat would run away like they're taught in the Nursery as kits.

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Light(silver)


Clan/Rank : Light: Riverclan apprentice Dusk: Rouge/Shadowclan Kit
Leo Horse
Number of posts : 249
Age : 22

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PostSubject: Re: My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!)   My plot for Lightpaw (Please read!) EmptySun 11 Aug 2013 - 16:03

Like I said I just thought this up like two nights ago. It was just something I had in mind. If you have ideas I would like to hear them. I would like to do something with Lightpaw though.

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