Nightkit's creation

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Cat Name: Nightkit

Tom or She-Cat: She-cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s): Blackstar, Scourge

Familiarity with the series: Yes

Appearance: Blackish blueish pelt

Personality: Love to fight

Origins:* Clan Born

Clan: Shadow Clan

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP):Nightkit went out of the nursery looking for her mother. She couldn't find her. She pouted and was about to give up when suddenly she realized that her mother might be out hunting. Thinking about how fun it would be to hunt with her mother Nightkit secretly left the camp. She found her mother and they went back home.

Hi! I'm Little, welcome to WCC ouo
A few suggestions. First, you could include your warrior name to this. Like Nightkit/paw/frost.
Next, you should add more details. For example~ A slender she-cat with striking green eyes and a black pelt the almost looks blue.
You could add some more detail to the personality. It would give roleplayers a good idea of your cat's type of personality.
And the RP sample can't be so quick. 1.) you needed to put more detail into the beginning. For example; Nightkit rushed out of the nursery, her soft green-eyes full of distress as she wandered aimlessly through camp, her eyes wide with fear. "Mama!" she called in the middle of the camp clearing, with all the warriors and apprentices looking over at her, confused. "Mama!" she cried again.
2.) You can't go out of camp.
3.) You can't just say, 'she found her mother and they went home.' It has to be the story of how she found her mother.

No posting in creations, Little. Also, don't be so picky. If they give us what is acceptable in completing the creation, there is no need for giving them a hard time to make it seem more advanced. This person may not have roleplayed before, and if so, this is a beautiful creation. cx

I am sorry, but I also have one complaint, though. I don't understand what blueish black fur is. I can't picture this on a cat. Can you give me an image or something, please? ;u;