Warrior Clan Cats

The future's in your paws. Shape it well.

Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Moon

Moon


Clan/Rank : ThunderClan Kit
Scorpio Rat
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Age : 28

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PostSubject: Comments on my PJO Fanfic   Comments on my PJO Fanfic EmptyMon 1 Mar 2010 - 17:52

Please comment, and suggest anything that you feel.

WARNING: I only accept constructive critisizm.

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Rainy

Rainy


Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27

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PostSubject: Re: Comments on my PJO Fanfic   Comments on my PJO Fanfic EmptyMon 1 Mar 2010 - 17:54

That was EXCELLENT. I only suggest that you describe things in more detail
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Moon

Moon


Clan/Rank : ThunderClan Kit
Scorpio Rat
Number of posts : 3521
Age : 28

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PostSubject: Re: Comments on my PJO Fanfic   Comments on my PJO Fanfic EmptyMon 1 Mar 2010 - 17:56

Thank you, will do.

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PostSubject: Re: Comments on my PJO Fanfic   Comments on my PJO Fanfic EmptyTue 2 Mar 2010 - 3:30

I agree. It is very good, though the chapters COULD be a bit longer. ^^

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