Warrior Clan Cats

The future's in your paws. Shape it well.

Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Shiningkit

Shiningkit


Clan/Rank : WindClan/Kit
Aries Tiger
Number of posts : 8
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptySun 21 Oct 2012 - 7:54

Cat Name: Shiningkit

Tom or She-Cat: She-cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s): Brambleclaw

Familiarity with the series:The New Prophecy

Appearance: White fur, it shines in sunlight

Personality: quite, shy, kind

Origins:*

Clan: WIndClan

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Shiningkit played with Her sister, Icekit, and her brother, Loudkit, today. First, she pushed over Icekit. Then Loudkit surprised her by pouncing on her from behind. Shiningkit pushed him off and then she chased him around the nursery. Icekit got bored and laid down beside their mother, Spottedshadow. Afterward, they talked about what they wanted their warrior names to be, when they grow up.


Last edited by Diamondstar on Tue 23 Oct 2012 - 14:44; edited 2 times in total
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Shadow


Characters : Bramblekit
Clan/Rank : Windclan kit
Leo Pig
Number of posts : 6644
Age : 29

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PostSubject: Re: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptySun 21 Oct 2012 - 8:04

wow this a pretty great creation! there are only a few things that need to be fixed~

1. On this site, we are trying to be at least a little bit traditional by sticking to how the cats are in the books. Unfortunately, I do not believe that cats know what diamonds are. May I suggest Icekit, Snowkit, or simply Whitekit? Or maybe just under weird circumstances, because of her fur, Shiningkit or Shinekit? :3

2. the RP sample is really good too~ the only thing needing to be fixed is that on this site, we like to roleplay in 3rd person instead of 1st like this:

"[insertnamehere] played with her sister Icekit and her brother Loudkit today."

Other than those couple changes, everything looks great :D
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Shiningkit

Shiningkit


Clan/Rank : WindClan/Kit
Aries Tiger
Number of posts : 8
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptyTue 23 Oct 2012 - 14:22

I edited the post. How is it now?
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Sleepy

Sleepy


Clan/Rank : RiverClan
Capricorn Tiger
Number of posts : 9741
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptyTue 23 Oct 2012 - 15:21

I really like how your personality for your character is consistent. That seems random, but srsly. There's a lot of people who are "I AM A SHY AND KIND KITTY BUT I AM ALSO FIERCE AND WILL RIP OUT YOUR TRACHEA"

Approved xP

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Shiningkit

Shiningkit


Clan/Rank : WindClan/Kit
Aries Tiger
Number of posts : 8
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptyWed 24 Oct 2012 - 14:05

Since my creation has been approved I can do parents finder and other stuff on this website?
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Little

Little


Clan/Rank : I'm currently inactive from the site due to life.
Capricorn Cat
Number of posts : 3059
Age : 24

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PostSubject: Re: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptyWed 24 Oct 2012 - 14:10

Yep. So, have you thought about my offer? 'Cause Gingerpaw's about to finish her assessment, and when she does that and finishes her border patrol, Feathersong's having kits :3

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Shiningkit

Shiningkit


Clan/Rank : WindClan/Kit
Aries Tiger
Number of posts : 8
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptyWed 24 Oct 2012 - 14:22

What was your offer again, I forgot what it was.
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Little

Little


Clan/Rank : I'm currently inactive from the site due to life.
Capricorn Cat
Number of posts : 3059
Age : 24

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PostSubject: Re: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptyWed 24 Oct 2012 - 14:28

Lul. I can be your parent if you go to ShadowClan cx

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Shiningkit

Shiningkit


Clan/Rank : WindClan/Kit
Aries Tiger
Number of posts : 8
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptyWed 24 Oct 2012 - 14:31

Thanks for the offer but, I'm going to stay with WindClan. Sorry.
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Little

Little


Clan/Rank : I'm currently inactive from the site due to life.
Capricorn Cat
Number of posts : 3059
Age : 24

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PostSubject: Re: Cat Creation   Cat Creation EmptyWed 24 Oct 2012 - 14:46

Oh, that's completely fine :3

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