creation of rockkit

name: rockkit

tom/she-cat: tom

favorite warrior characters: firestar,bluestar,brightheart,cloudtail

familiarity with the series: ALL THE BOOKS

appearance: orange right eye blue left eye, white pelt with black spots

personality: quiet semi aggressive forgetful

origins: full-clan

clan: thunderclan

RP Sample: "as rockkit stared out into the sky he saw a bird he followed the bird leaving the clan rockkit got lost and then thunderclan warriors found him out in the woods they returned him to the nersury

Welcome to WCC! ^^ There are just a few things that need fixing.

Skykit is not an accepted name. Since the clans are Sky, River, Wind, Thunder, and Shadow, the warriors consider that sacred, and so the name itself is not allowed for use.

Also, the appearance seems rather rugged for a quiet, fast, and friendly cat. Torn ear AND a missing eye? Everybody loves a cat with all its pieces. Maybe he can get a torn ear when he's older and has been in a battle. :)

Finally, the RP sample. RP is role-playing, which is what the site is about. These are miniature paragraphs that could have been taken right out of one of the books. For example:

Rainstar leaped onto the Tall Rock. She had tragic news to share with the clan, but it had to be done. Taking a deep breath, she called Windclan to her.

Just like that. ^^ All you gotta do is fix those areas, and you're good to go! :3

thx i'll fix it now!

okej fixed

Okay, just a rule real quick: avoid double-posting, as that will get you in trouble. I was watching the topic so I could approve it as soon as possible. :)

All right, everything looks good. A tip for your RPing, try to use punctuation and capitalization. That will make it much easier for you and others to read it. ^^

Now just read the rules, find the Secret Word and send it to me, and I'll approve this! :D

Approved!