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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 16:04 | |
| So Coldstep's plot. NOT FULLY DONE YET, but here's a preview :D... - Spoiler:
Coldkit is a regular, stubborn kit Stormwing is a little too strict with him(Cold's own fault >.>) Stormwing is killed saving Coldkit, right in front of his eyes Coldkit becomes a bully to the other kits until he's apprenticed Until then, Raincloud and Creamstripe kind of mother him. Creamstripe being the strict side to teach him right and wrong, while Raincloud tried to love him :3 Coldkit became Coldpaw(He never actually liked Cream and Rainy acting motherly to him ._.) Coldpaw's mentor was Raincloud, who deals with him quite well, despite his rude attitude Coldpaw joins the Dark Forest and kicks Happy's butt *shot* Raincloud has a stomach ache, so Creamstripe takes him out for hunting Coldpaw basically almost tears Creamstripe's arm off...and attempts to murder her out of cold blood Singethorn appears, knocking Coldpaw away from Creamstripe and giving Creamstripe enough strength to drag herself to camp, while Coldpaw makes a scene in camp, lying about how they were attacked by a strange orange rogue she-cat, and he tried to save Creamstripe but failed Creamstripe heals, but ends up moving to the elders' den because of the horrid shoulder wound Coldpaw gave her Coldpaw is extra nice to Creamstripe, as if trying to repay her for "Not being able to save her from the rogue", therefor making his story more believable Creamstripe is forced to keep quiet about what really happen, as Coldpaw threatens to kill her one day if she says anything
(I don't know what will happen during the rest of the time he's an apprentice yet...to be edited)
(When he's a warrior)Coldstep becomes a warrior Eventually, after all this time, Lilystem is sent a message from starclan about how Coldstep had put Creamstripe in the elders' den, not a rogue Coldstep some how finds out she knows, and on the day she plans to tell the clan what really happened, Coldstep murders her before she can(THIS IS AFTER DARK BECOMES A FULL MEDI CAT) Eventually, Coldstep gets an apprentice and tortures him/her during training. Attempts to force join into Dark Forest(Lilystem's next life MIGHT be his apprentice...not sure)
Time skip....(not sure what will happen while he has the apprentice)
Coldstep completes training his apprentice and he/she becomes a warrior Coldstep murders Raincloud, so he can take over as deputy, as everyone at this point thinks of him as a good, strong, loyal clan cat(except for Creamstripe XD. Bramblestar said he can eventually become deputy, but not leader) Coldstep EVENTUALLY becomes deputy Coldstep is really strict and a little mean when he does his duties, like interrupting Bramblestar during his orders, making his own decisions, or being very harsh when a clanmate disobeys his orders After a while of this, Creamstripe is told by Singethorn and Maypaw a warning that Coldstep plots to take over Skyclan by killing Bramblestar. They also mention that Coldstep was the one to kill Lilystem and Raincloud! So she tells the leader once she hears, along with all the rest of the truth behind Coldstep killing Raincloud, Lilystem, and almost herself. Coldstep is exiled Coldstep continues his life as a rogue and Dark Forest warrior
...The rest hasn't been decided yet :3 (To be edited)
Long plot I know >.> but evil cats have long plots! lolz ______________________________________
Last edited by Stormy~Coldpaw on Fri 18 May 2012 - 13:09; edited 2 times in total |
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May
Characters : Maypaw & Silvershade most notably Clan/Rank : RiverClan vet Number of posts : 2194 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 17:50 | |
| How about Creamstripe knows because of her mother and Maypaw? Also, by the way, Singethorn didn't appear. Creamstripe turned into Singethorn. :D |
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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 17:54 | |
| I know I was going to put "Singethorn appeared as Creamstripe" But I got lazy :D
And surreeee X3 ______________________________________ |
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May
Characters : Maypaw & Silvershade most notably Clan/Rank : RiverClan vet Number of posts : 2194 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 17:55 | |
| o3o Coolio.
I just realized you have a PF account. I should hook you up on the forums. c: |
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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 17:57 | |
| k :D I've had that account for years though X3 *committed veterian(or however you spell that)* ______________________________________ |
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~Bramblestar~
Clan/Rank : SkyClan Leader Number of posts : 921 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 17:58 | |
| :D I like it..... can Bramble kill him? I think this is a very well thought out plan
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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 18:01 | |
| Thanks :D and I'm not sure...you're actually the 3rd person to ask that XD
WHY DOES EVERYONE WANT TO KILL MEEEE?!-Oh yeah cuz Cold is an evil be*ch -u- ______________________________________ |
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Darkfang
Clan/Rank : A reeaalllyy old member Number of posts : 637 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 18:02 | |
| But u said u wanted to kill Hawk, so that means he can't kill u... |
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~Bramblestar~
Clan/Rank : SkyClan Leader Number of posts : 921 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 18:04 | |
| I also forgot to ask if Cold could kill one one of Bramble's life when they're fighting? |
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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 18:08 | |
| GUYS calm down =3=
Torn: They decided on letting Hawk die as an elder, so he's out of the question >:U
Bramble: I could do that, but I'm not making promises. I haven' decided who's going to kill him yet...besides even when I do it won't be for a long time >.> ______________________________________ |
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May
Characters : Maypaw & Silvershade most notably Clan/Rank : RiverClan vet Number of posts : 2194 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 18:10 | |
| I could arrange for Dove to kill him. Like, since he'll be a rogue, he could be at the River. It's a place where the few rogues can post. ^^
Although, she is gonna be a medicine cat. But there could be a prophecy. |
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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 18:13 | |
| Possibly. I have 4 people who want to kill him right now...fail XD ______________________________________ |
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~Bramblestar~
Clan/Rank : SkyClan Leader Number of posts : 921 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 18:17 | |
| Congrats! Now, who'll be #5 to kill Cold? Anyone,anyone? Going once...going twice...
XD |
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Stormi the Gummy
Clan/Rank : {Storm}Riverclan/Experienced Warrior {Adder}Thunderclan/Experienced Warrior {Red}Shadowclan/Experienced Warrior {Wolf}Shadowclan/Apprentice Number of posts : 3741 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 18:21 | |
| omg bramble XD *rofls* ______________________________________ |
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Mink
Number of posts : 2105
| Subject: Re: Coldstep's plot Thu 17 May 2012 - 19:04 | |
| :3 Yes, but Cold, you can try to kill me. Kind of like Cream. But not that bad hurt. Lol you can make a post right now if you want about trying to kill me. But, I'll ether have to flee or win. So... *Dun dunn dunnnnn* What will happen? ______________________________________ |
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