Nerokit of Shadowclan

Cat Name: Brownkit

Tom or She-Cat: she cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s):Scourge and Bone

Familiarity with the series:45 out of 45

Appearance: black cat with a brown paw she is big and muscular

Personality:sometimes crazy kind loving protective and brave

Origins:Riverclan

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP):

Brownkit was sleeping in her nest. She had lost her mom and brothers just a moon ago. She woke up and saw a kit"hi....."she mewed kinda quiet like.
Brownkit got up and padded over but noticed that see was seeing things. So she padded out into camp to see it was still dark.

Hello and welcome to WCC! I'm going to help you with a few problems on your creation :)

First of all, you can not have Nero in your name. It doesn't exactly make sense. Try picking a name that represents what your cat looks like, like maybe Nightkit, Blackkit, Brownkit(maybe Brownfoot later because of her brown foot?), etc.

Next, let's have a look at your Role play sample. Try to use proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation while role playing.
Example: Nerokit was sleeping in her nest. She had lost her mom and brothers just a moon ago. She woke up and saw a kit. "Hi..." she mewed, kinda quiet like. Nerokit got up and padded over [(What is bunotied?)] that she was seeing things. So she padded out into camp to see if it was still dark.

(I underlined things like "nest. She" because you didn't put spaces in between the period and the next sentence.)

Everything else seems fine!~ Once you fix those things, wait for an admin or moderator to approve it. You also have to send Willowstream(Rain) or Vash The Bluejay the secret word found in the rules, via PM.

Welcome to WCC! ^^

I'm glad you understood the template. However, there are a couple of things that may have to change.

The name 'Nero' is not something the warriors would be named. You can choose a different name, something about her appearance. :)

Also, Shadowclan is full at the moment. :( I apologize for that, but there are plenty of other clans that are just as fun and would be willing to accept you!

Fix those two items, PM me the secret word, and I can approve you! ^^

Perfect! Thank you for being so willing to change. ^^

Approved!

thank you