A new leg for metalpaw

Metalpaws metal leg was becoming quite small. She wondered if the twolegs would give her another. She had to find out before she could not walk at all. She travled to the twoleg place fence and crawled under a hole that was in it. It was early in the morning, the sun had bareky touched the sky and everything ws perfectly still. The remember the building they had brought her to the first time and she found it quite easyly. She walked though the open door and found a twoleg. It smelled vaugly firmiler. The twoleg gasped and took her back onto the room they had before. After looking over metalpaw it called another twoleg. This twoleg took out a claw and jammed it in to Metalpaw. She yelped by the sudden pain and soon fell asleep. When she woke up she checked her leg. sure enough he was a brand new leg attached to her stump. It was much shinyer than the last one and it was much bigger. They had even attached claws to this one!

After a while, the twolegs still hadnt came back. It was starting to get late and Metalpaw needed to return the thunderclan. When they finslly came back they put her in a cage. "Wait, no I need to get out!" she yowled. She busted the door to the cage open and bolted out the still open door. She ran down the thunderpath untill she got back to the fence, the twolegs were still chaseing her but she crawled back under the fence and ran into Thunderclan teritory.

Occ- there she has a new leg :3

Snowclaw was having a stroll in Thunderclan territory,to get a little break.Then suddenly she heard Two-legs and a cat,dashing through the forest.She tensed and shrunk down.Then,she heard the familiar clanking of metal."Metalpaw!" she yowled "Im coming!"

Metalpaws leg was stuck bettwen the fence and the forest and the twolegs were gaining on her. She heard and smelled Snowclaw. "Mother, help!" she cried.

Snowclaw dashed through the forest,soon reaching the fence.The tugged it with her teeth as hard as she could.Then she felt a sharp pain in her mouth.She pulled her mouth of the fence.It had got lose enough for Metalpaw to get through,but one of her teeth was lodged in the fence.She frowned,and tasted her own blood in her mouth.Then she shook her head,noticing the Two-legs were only 2 fox-lengths away."Run!" she yowled

Metalpaw felt the metal leg become free so she got up and dashed away, following Snowclaw. It was about sunhigh by now, her new leg felt great, however is made even more sound than the last one. "CLANK! CLANK! CLANK!" the leg seemed to say. Metalpaw put her large ears back in emmbarresment. "Great, this ones worse than the last, ill never be a good hunter now!" she wailed.

"Im sure you will!" she mewed as she sped through the forest,the Two-legs hot on their trail.

"Clank, clank, clank." the legs noise let the twolegs know where they were. "Over there!" they talked in twoleg language. "We have to stop or we will lead them to camp." Metalpaw said. She climed a small tree and jumped onto bigger ones. This was hard for her legs were very short.


Occ- shes one of those cats with extremly short legs, i think theres a breed name...=\

From a past injury,Snowclaw found it hard to climb the tree.In the end,the gave up.The Two-legs were litteraly just behind her,so she ran into the forest

when the twolegs had followed Snowclaw long enough she climbed down and sneeked quietly into the forest. Her leg had then agusted and it was not perfectly silent, other than when she agusted it. "Snowclaw!" she yowled.

Meanwhile,near the river,Snowclaw was still running.She didn't go to the camp for obvious reasons.She was tiring fast.Soon she would have to stop.No,you can't stop! she told herself,and sprtinted on.Soon the reached the bank of the river.She jumped in,and the current was strong.It pulled her under."Help!" she gurgled.The she felt something grab her by the scruff,and pull her out.It was the female Two-leg."Help!" she yowled "Please,oh please,HELP!" she yowled,as the Two-legs carried her through the forest.

Hazelpaw flicked her ears when she heard a crie for help.After saying goodbye to her aunt she raced into the forest towards the noise.

Metalpaw heard her mother cry for help. She raced though the forest until she found her mother being carried by the twoleg. She clawed the twoleg and it shreked in pain and anger. The twoleg then droped Snowclaw and begen walked torwards Metalpaw. Metalpaw backed up carefully.

"Metalpaw! Run!" she yowled.She leaped at the male Two-leg and clawed its chest.He grabbed her by the tail and was yowling something in Two-leg,then he threw her on the ground,where she hit a tree.She hit the ground,and yowled in pain.Two of her legs were broken.

occ- that's what you ment in the pm, why did you do that to Snow D:

ic- The twolegs walked away in anger as Metalpaw ran to her mother. "Mother! Your legs are broken!" she mewed, she knew this from watching Shinepaw. "Ill get Shinepaw, SHINEPAW!" she called, she didn't want to leave her mothers side.

occ- let me get shine

OOC:Don't worry,she'll heal (In a while DX)
IC:"Its ok.I can get back to camp by my-" she mewed,but she tried to move and ended up dragging herself.