laying around aka my death!!!

she was lying in a corner of the camp breathing heavily. earlier she had tripped and landed on a rock spire that had pierced near her heart. she could barley breathe now. "SOMEONE!!! HELP!!!!"she cried despratley!!

OOC: sry i alredy changed my profile and im like signing up for my 2nd life but in this post in dapple!

Icepaw woke up because of a cry for help. He rushed out of the medicine cat's den, and noticed Dapplepaw lying in a corner.

"Dapplepaw! What happened?" he asked as he rushed over, examining her for any wounds.

OOC: Ebs, we need you! I don't know what to do yet, I'm just beginning my training!

ooc:

She tripped.... on a pointy rock... that just happened to get past her rib cage... and pierce her heart... e_e
She wouldn't even have gotten two fox-lengths before dying, much less to camp.

Sorry Ice. D: She's screwed either way.

OOC: I know, but he still doesn't know what to do. And this is like the first cat he has helped so ya...he would be sad like when Cinderpelt was sad about not saving Silverstream.

ooc: Okay, your right. xP

bic:

Ebonyroot, who had been coming into camp for her apprentice's training, had also heard Dapplepaw's wail. She padded up to them. "Icepaw, what's the matter with her?"

"It seems that she fell on a rock ...she can't breath... I'm guessing it also pierced her heart..." he explained after examining a wound on her chest(?).

OOC: I don't know where a cat's heart is lol

Ebonyroot flattened her ears; What could they do, besides to patch it up. Such a fatal wound would need more then that. The only thing she could think of that might help were. Foxglove seeds, but those were too big of a risk.
"Icepaw, run into your den and retrieve cobwebs and chamomile... They're the little white petals..."

Icepaw nodded and rushed to his den. He looked around before finding what he needed. He rushed back with cobwebs and chamomile in his mouth. He laid them down in front of Ebonyroot and watched silently, hoping that Dapplepaw would be okay.

Firepaw looked out of the apprentices` den, and saw Dapplepaw on the ground. "Oh, no!!!" she cried, running to her denmates` side. She looked up at Ebonyroot in fear. "What`s wrong with her??" she asked in panic for her denmate.

Icepaw looked at his sister, seeing the panic in her eyes.

"She fell on a rock. It almost pierced her heart. Hopefully we can keep her alive..."he mewed to Firepaw.

OOC: I know you want to die, but I'm going to at least try. I let you die in the end.

"We're going to try all we can to save her..." She finished for Icepaw, then flicked him with her tail. "Put the cobwebs over her wound, we need to stop the bleeding. I'll feed her this... it'll calm her down and strengthen her heart..."
She found that after she had given him his command, she was muttering more to herself rather then to her apprentice.

Icepaw did as he was told and put the cobwebs on Dapplepaw's wound. He applied pressure, knowing that it would help more.

"Like this?" he asked, a bit unsure that he was doing it right.

She glanced at him, "Yes. Keep your paw on her to help..."

ooc: Let's wait for her to post, if she ever does that is. xP

OOC: sry my mom grounded me XD

Dapplepaw looked at the hazy pictures of her friends and family. she never knew who her real parents were but she realized that this was her home, and her family.

Petalpaw was hunting at the edge of the territory and suddenly felt that something was wrong. She hurried back to camp forgetting the rabbit she had just caught. When she appeared from the tunnle she turned to see her best friend lying in a cornner with many cats surrownding her. Petalpaw sholdered her way to her friend's side.
"What happened?" she asked, panicing.