Warrior Clan Cats
The future's in your paws. Shape it well.Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
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Laurel
Characters : Softsong (deceased), Tunnelheart (deceased), Monarchwing (deceased), Owlfeather (deceased), Echo (deceased), Brightwing (deceased), Meadowfall (deceased), Spirit ( formerly known as Coalspirit) (deceased), Sandfire, Peonyflower (deceased), Swampkit (deceased), Swirlspirit (deceased), Tunnelpaw(deceased ), Dream Peircer(deceased), Brokenflame(deceased), Roaringpaw(gone), Songpaw(deceased), River (used to be known as Rushreed)(mia),Cobraeyes, Lilypaw(deceased), Ravenpaw(MIA),Swanpaw(MIA), Fracturedsnow , Tallpaw, Dappledkit, Juno
Clan/Rank : Sandfire: Shadowclan warrior///// Cobraeyes:Thunderclan warrior////// Fracturedsnow-Shadowclan newly made warrior ///// Tallpaw- Windclan Apprentice////\\ Dappledkit- Thunderclan kit///// Juno -Rogue
 
Number of posts : 3484
Age : 25
| | Subject: Opinions on My Remake Wed Jun 10, 2015 11:34 am | |
| Ok so I did a remake of an old drawing. I'd like opinion please. Before (old-2014):  After(new-now):  ______________________________________  Laurellight•Yarrowpaw•Jaguarkit
Shadowclan•Riverclan•Thunderclan
N.A Warrior•Apprentice•kit
No apprentice•n/a •N/a
Lark of RC(to be mate) •to be Hawkpaw•n/a
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| | | | Bloom
Characters : (F)rozenflame ||| (E)mberleaf ||| (B)lazingleap ||| (A)dderpaw||| (C)rowpaw ||| (G)ingerkit
Clan/Rank : (F): Thunderclan/Deputy ||| (E): Windclan/Elder ||| (B): Thunderclan/Newly Appointed Warrior ||| (A): Shadowclan/Apprentice ||| (C): Riverclan/Apprentice
 Number of posts : 2969
Age : 1009
| | Subject: Re: Opinions on My Remake Wed Jun 10, 2015 11:50 am | |
| I like the remake ______________________________________ Emberleaf - Crowclaw - Adderfur - Frozenflame - Blazingleap Gingerpaw |
| | | | Laurel
Characters : Softsong (deceased), Tunnelheart (deceased), Monarchwing (deceased), Owlfeather (deceased), Echo (deceased), Brightwing (deceased), Meadowfall (deceased), Spirit ( formerly known as Coalspirit) (deceased), Sandfire, Peonyflower (deceased), Swampkit (deceased), Swirlspirit (deceased), Tunnelpaw(deceased ), Dream Peircer(deceased), Brokenflame(deceased), Roaringpaw(gone), Songpaw(deceased), River (used to be known as Rushreed)(mia),Cobraeyes, Lilypaw(deceased), Ravenpaw(MIA),Swanpaw(MIA), Fracturedsnow , Tallpaw, Dappledkit, Juno
Clan/Rank : Sandfire: Shadowclan warrior///// Cobraeyes:Thunderclan warrior////// Fracturedsnow-Shadowclan newly made warrior ///// Tallpaw- Windclan Apprentice////\\ Dappledkit- Thunderclan kit///// Juno -Rogue
Number of posts : 3484
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Opinions on My Remake Wed Jun 10, 2015 11:53 am | |
| Thanks Togepi I have to say though I worked like 5 days on the remake and I really like it where I messed up in the old one was it was too dark and Swiftpaw ' s legs were too short but I corrected myself in the remake and it really looks good to me. ______________________________________ Laurellight•Yarrowpaw•Jaguarkit
Shadowclan•Riverclan•Thunderclan
N.A Warrior•Apprentice•kit
No apprentice•n/a •N/a
Lark of RC(to be mate) •to be Hawkpaw•n/a
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| | | | Pinely-san
Characters : Blizzardsky / Sablefur / Palepaw / Larktalon / Patchface / Rowancloud / Sedgeclaw / Owlfang / Pinepaw / Thornpaw / Gorsepaw / Toadpaw / Muddykit / Rookpaw / Daypaw
Clan/Rank : [M] RiverClan Apprentice [R] ShadowClan Apprentice [D] ThunderClan Apprentice
 
Number of posts : 5344
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Opinions on My Remake Wed Jun 10, 2015 1:59 pm | |
| The remake is a huge improvement! Very good. I have a few tips for your drawings, though, if you don't mind. ^^ I notice you draw your legs coming from the body straight down. In reality, cats' front legs go outward and then back in instead of straight down. https://i.imgur.com/5eIfnUp.pngI also noticed that you draw your fur sort of jagged and spiky. It's hard to tell you exactly how to draw it, but usually drawing lines overtop of one another can help sometimes. https://i.imgur.com/nZckMKA.pngKeep up the good work, and I hope this helps! ^^ ______________________________________ |
| | | | Coal
Number of posts : 1823
Age : 20
| | Subject: Re: Opinions on My Remake Wed Jun 10, 2015 5:10 pm | |
| Great job, Softsong! :D
And, I know this was for Softsong, but thanks for the tip, Pinely. ______________________________________ - My Babies:
Thornkit | Apprentice ceremony needed. | #663300 | Toy Soldiers - Marianas Trench
Rushkit | Apprentice ceremony needed. | #0000ff | Warriors - Imagine Dragons
Radiantkit | Apprentice ceremony needed. | #9933cc | Can't Pin Me Down - Marina and the Diamonds
Wolfkit | Apprentice ceremony needed. | #000000 | To This Day - Shane Koyczan
Flarekit | Apprentice ceremony needed. | #ff3300 | Halo/Walking on Sunshine - Glee Cast
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| | | | Laurel
Characters : Softsong (deceased), Tunnelheart (deceased), Monarchwing (deceased), Owlfeather (deceased), Echo (deceased), Brightwing (deceased), Meadowfall (deceased), Spirit ( formerly known as Coalspirit) (deceased), Sandfire, Peonyflower (deceased), Swampkit (deceased), Swirlspirit (deceased), Tunnelpaw(deceased ), Dream Peircer(deceased), Brokenflame(deceased), Roaringpaw(gone), Songpaw(deceased), River (used to be known as Rushreed)(mia),Cobraeyes, Lilypaw(deceased), Ravenpaw(MIA),Swanpaw(MIA), Fracturedsnow , Tallpaw, Dappledkit, Juno
Clan/Rank : Sandfire: Shadowclan warrior///// Cobraeyes:Thunderclan warrior////// Fracturedsnow-Shadowclan newly made warrior ///// Tallpaw- Windclan Apprentice////\\ Dappledkit- Thunderclan kit///// Juno -Rogue
Number of posts : 3484
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: Opinions on My Remake Wed Jun 10, 2015 5:56 pm | |
| I'll keep that in mind thanks pinely I always don't mind tips. ______________________________________ Laurellight•Yarrowpaw•Jaguarkit
Shadowclan•Riverclan•Thunderclan
N.A Warrior•Apprentice•kit
No apprentice•n/a •N/a
Lark of RC(to be mate) •to be Hawkpaw•n/a
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