Review of 24 Hours~~~~~

Sleepy, what are you going to do with that whip?? *shot*

anyway, yeah. It was a little rushed but I did like how you ended it. It had a little bit of suspense which always keeps the readers coming back :3 Oh and your diction is pretty neat as well~

NOW FOR CH. 3 :D

"...and the admins settled down on a two-seater couch placed to the side of the circle." That's it? D: I was hoping for something els- *shot*

TEAM MAY AND HOPE! :D With the 2 of us combined, I was sure we would win D:

Aha, so me in sleeps have 2 million dollars, eh?
*rubs hands together* I suppose I should put life insurance on him~
You never know what could happen. >:3

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*Runs*

Hahaha, no, you never do know what could happen. ;D

I would have ragequitted irl if it landed on 1. I remember when I flipped the board when I was playing some game with a spinner and it landed on one. xDD

Really good, Rayne! C: Keep it up!! *hugs* .w.