Warrior Clan Cats

The future's in your paws. Shape it well.

Roleplay in a cat Clan of warriors. Based off the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. Takes place in an AU before the cats in the books existed.
 
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Honey Badger
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Splotch
Hope
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Rainy

Rainy


Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27

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PostSubject: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptySat Jan 28, 2012 2:54 pm

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY


If there was anything you didn't like, if there is anything that needs to be fixed, if anything is amiss, if there is a loophole, if I didn't portray a character correctly, or anything else, LET ME KNOW!! I want to make this story as accurate as possible!

Thanks for reading, btw. X3
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Jay

Jay


Taurus Tiger
Number of posts : 9353
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptySat Jan 28, 2012 3:35 pm

It's awesome. XD Nice job so far.

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not fish

not fish


Clan/Rank : Professional zombie.
Capricorn Buffalo
Number of posts : 6614
Gender : what is gender
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptySat Jan 28, 2012 4:13 pm

I love it. Write some more soon. 8D

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i was fish the whole time, surprise


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Shadow
Former Staff
Former Staff
Shadow


Characters : Bramblekit
Clan/Rank : Windclan kit
Leo Pig
Number of posts : 6644
Age : 28

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptySat Jan 28, 2012 5:05 pm

umm.. what they said :D I can't wait to read what you come up with :3
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Rainy

Rainy


Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptySat Jan 28, 2012 6:00 pm

Lol, that was just the prologue. XD

I'm hoping this turns out the way I want it to.
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Hope


Number of posts : 1053

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptyTue Jan 31, 2012 7:39 am

Review of Chapter 1...

Oh glob, Rain. You had to write that, didn't you? XD

I should probably mention that whenever I'm around a guy I like, I blush like crazy. DX

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RIP Mitch Lucker of Suicide Silence
We will never forget you <3

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Splotch

Splotch


Characters : Sleepycloud, Hopepaw, Zero
Clan/Rank : Ye Old Member--Sleepycloud (T2), Hopepaw [ThunderClan], Zero
Taurus Dragon
Number of posts : 3513
Gender : She/her
Age : 23

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptyTue Jan 31, 2012 8:35 am

Review of Chapter 1.

Great!! I loved it! can't wait to read more!!

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Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ BUnd2i0
Sleepycloud || Hopepaw || Zero
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Sleepy

Sleepy


Clan/Rank : RiverClan
Capricorn Tiger
Number of posts : 9738
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptyTue Jan 31, 2012 1:25 pm

I guess I'll review chapter by chapter too cx

Very good start. It's a little slow at first, but I feel like you potray everyone decently well (Even if that means that we seem a little cardboard from shyness cx). I'm sure that it'll pick up at a faster pace soon c: So keep on writing, I can't wait to see Chapter 2 :D

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Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ I42GrfL
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Rainy

Rainy


Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptyTue Jan 31, 2012 2:01 pm

I've been trying to work on my detail, but yes, it should pick up soon. c:
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Honey Badger
Former Staff
Former Staff
Honey Badger


Characters : Current: Acornstar, Badgermask, Creamsky, Duckpaw, Eveningmoon - Old: Badgerfang, Silentherb, Stormstar, Stormeye, Twistedfoot, Badgerpaw, Nightcloud, Maplestar, Honeypaw, Bearmask, Ryefur, Owlheart, Morningpaw, Creamstorm, Smokeheart, Badgerpaw, Cinderpaw, Elmpaw, Stormpaw, Larksong, Amberpelt, Lionspark, Smokestripe, Mottleheart, Storm that Lights the Clouds, Leopardpaw, Honeytongue, Foxfire, Flintshard, Hayglow, Muddyleap, Theron
Clan/Rank : [A]ThunderClan T5 Leader [B] ShadowClan T5 Warrior [C] SkyClan T5 Warrior [D] RiverClan Apprentice [E] WindClan T2 Warrior
Gemini Buffalo
Number of posts : 7359
Gender : She/Them/He
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptyTue Jan 31, 2012 2:23 pm

Hey....I didn't see me. We need more Badger! Oh, and if I ever see Coon in there, I would most likely tell Muffin at her, as that is what I call her. =p Oh, and it was very good. Write more soon!

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Acornstar ~ Badgermask ~ Creamsky ~ Duckpaw ~ Eveningmoon
TC T5 Leader (80 HP - 170 SP) ~ SC T5 Warrior (70 HP - 160 SP) ~ SkC T5 Warrior (70 HP - 160 SP) ~ RC Apprentice (20 HP - 60 SP)~ WC T2 Warrior (35 HP - 70 SP*)
Rosybrown (Forest)/Sandybrown (Feral) ~ Indigo ~ Tan ~ Olive ~ Icyblue
*Disadvantage Stats
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Swifty

Swifty


Clan/Rank : Windclan Leader~Shadowclan Apprentice~Windclan Warrior
Capricorn Buffalo
Number of posts : 2370
Age : 26

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptyTue Jan 31, 2012 6:36 pm

It's awesome ^^

FOREVER ALONE :( sad i couldn't be in it X_X

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First Life: Swiftstar, Windclan leader.
Second Life: Moonsoul (Moonpaw, he died before he became a warrior.)
Third Life: Silverthorn

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Rainy

Rainy


Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptyTue Jan 31, 2012 6:59 pm

@Badger- Sorry, more people will show in the next chapter.

@Swufty- It was up for nearly a week. /:
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Sleepy

Sleepy


Clan/Rank : RiverClan
Capricorn Tiger
Number of posts : 9738
Age : 25

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 9:33 pm

Chapter 2 reviasg;askjga;skgj.

I really dunno what to say about it x3 It felt a bit rushed, but other than that the small cliffhanger thing and the build up is making me want chapter 3 now >:c *Takes out whip*

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May

May


Characters : Maypaw & Silvershade most notably
Clan/Rank : RiverClan vet
Virgo Snake
Number of posts : 2194
Age : 22

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 9:35 pm

I want it too D:<

Why'd we have to be last? D:

No phair. Alo, lulz, good job. I am afraid of the dark o3o <3
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Rainy

Rainy


Characters : Heatherpaw
Pisces Buffalo
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27

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PostSubject: Re: Review of 24 Hours~~~~~   Review of 24 Hours~~~~~ EmptySun Feb 05, 2012 9:42 pm

It was sort of rushed... I've been trying to get it finished, but every time I went to work on it, I couldn't focus. -__-
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