Snowpaw's training with Scarletpaw

Snowpaw tuck her tail in ,got on her hind legs then jumped as she jumped she weaved to the left then to the right and scored her claws in the tree.

"Sigh. You're getting the hang of it, but that doesn't satisfy me. Your enemy could get under you and flip you over easily! So leap backwards in a dodge, then strike forward instead of staying in your current spot." Suddenly, the she-cat felt as if she were being watched. No scent lingered nearby, so she knew it might be an experienced warrior. Sighing, she ignored it.

"I can smell another dark forest catt."Snowpaw mewed.

Ooc: does "no scent lingered nearby" mean nothing anymore!? XD

IC: Scarletfire shook her head. "Ignore it. Training matters more. Now, show me once more."

Snowpaw tried again but when she jumped she fell halfway through the jump"can i learn something new pleasse!"Snowpaw asked.

Scarletfire let her paw rake the apprentices cheek. "Did I tell you to speak!? Quit your complaining! Try again, dumb ThunderClan kit!" She glared at her, eyes burning with anger.

ooc i have never read of a dark forest mentor be that mean before oh and she is not a kit anymore

ic Snowpaw quickly closed her eyes and left because it was time to go "See you tonite Scarletfire!"Snowpaw mewed.

ooc2 do you want to start a new topic for the next's night training

Ooc: I know... Because calling someone a kit is an insult. And yeah, ik c:

Ic: Scarletfire snarled. "Yeah, go to bed. I'll hope you perfect that, mouse-brained cat."

so what's going to be the name of the new topic i want you to make it though please

Don't care. Though, its rly not necessary for a new topic.

ok well let's do continue the next night training her at 12:00 is that fine with you

Kk

Snowpaw wakes up the next night in the Dark Forest.
"Scarletfire are you here?"Snowpaw yowled.

Scarletfire creeped from the shadows. "Why wouldn't I be? You sure you're not as weak as you were yesterday?"

"No,I'm ready!"Snowpaw mewed confidently.