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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan
 
Number of posts : 1488
Age : 24
| | Subject: My WCC poem Wed 30 Nov 2011 - 12:32 | |
| WCC
We are family.
Together we soar.
Always together,
Apart nevermore.
Always remember,
The laughter we shared.
And keep in your heart,
The hardships we shared.
Together we stand.
Saving each other.
Everyone like,
Our sister or brother.
An abyss waits,
For our demise.
It’s coming soon,
Open your eyes!
Separating,
Drawing apart.
All you need to do,
Is open your heart.
The darkness is,
A veil.
As I watch,
I grow pale.
Listen!
Open your ears!
Don’t let,
In the fears.
Don’t help this.
In the beginning,
We were
Winning.
Winning the battle,
Between light,
And dark,
If you don’t fight,
There will be,
Nothing left to fight for.
No more for us.
Left out, forever.
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Rainy
Characters : Heatherpaw
 
Number of posts : 5137
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Wed 30 Nov 2011 - 12:52 | |
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan
Number of posts : 1488
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Wed 30 Nov 2011 - 13:11 | |
| What do you like about it? |
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Swifty
Clan/Rank : Windclan Leader~Shadowclan Apprentice~Windclan Warrior
Number of posts : 2370
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Wed 30 Nov 2011 - 13:54 | |
| I like it but it kinda changes from being about us to a battle between the forces of light and darkness .3. |
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan
Number of posts : 1488
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Wed 30 Nov 2011 - 14:04 | |
| I see it as changing from one happy family to being drawn apart. |
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Swifty
Clan/Rank : Windclan Leader~Shadowclan Apprentice~Windclan Warrior
Number of posts : 2370
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Wed 30 Nov 2011 - 14:04 | |
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan
Number of posts : 1488
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Wed 30 Nov 2011 - 14:06 | |
| Think It's good enough to be published? |
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Swifty
Clan/Rank : Windclan Leader~Shadowclan Apprentice~Windclan Warrior
Number of posts : 2370
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Wed 30 Nov 2011 - 14:10 | |
| Sure, but then we may get a flood of n00bs saying,
'omigsh 4 form 2 sp4m n00bs 2 armz' |
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan
Number of posts : 1488
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Wed 30 Nov 2011 - 14:13 | |
| What? I can't understand that. |
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Sleepy
Clan/Rank : RiverClan
Number of posts : 9738
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Sat 3 Dec 2011 - 2:21 | |
| Do not attempt to decipher that without a professional at hand. ______________________________________ ‹‹ former site administrator ››
pm me |
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan
Number of posts : 1488
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Sun 4 Dec 2011 - 9:08 | |
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Sleepy
Clan/Rank : RiverClan
Number of posts : 9738
Age : 25
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Sun 4 Dec 2011 - 13:23 | |
| Yes, very c: ______________________________________ ‹‹ former site administrator ››
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan
Number of posts : 1488
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: My WCC poem Mon 5 Dec 2011 - 18:04 | |
| Thanks I'm putting it in my poem book. I decided on a pic book about pets. It only 4 pages. |
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