the birth of snowkit

Cat Name: Snowkit

Tom or She-Cat:She-cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s):Hollyleaf,Jayfeather,Lionblaze,Bluestar,Mosspelt,Mosskit,Mistystar,Stonefur,Graystripe,Firestar,Sandstorm,and Onestar

Familiarity with the series: 23

Appearance: small white she cat with brilliant blue eyes

Personality:friendly ,curious,eager,and strong

Origins: Thunderclan

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Snowkit woke up, startled by the smell of smoke. she looked around the nursery for someone, but she saw no one. "HELP" snowkit cried desperately.

hi! you need to change and add a few things into your creation. look at the changed i made below. also, we RP in third person, which instead of 'derpfang catches the mouse in his paws.' its 'derpfang CAUGHT the mouse in his paws.'
P.S. use the edit button instead of posting again please.

Cat Name: Snowkit

Tom or She-Cat:She-cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s):Hollyleaf,jayfeather,lionblaze,bluestar,mosspelt,mosskit,mistystar,stonefur,graystripe,firestar,sandstorm,and onestar

Familiarity with the series: (it means how many books you have read)

Appearance: small white she cat with brilliant blue eyes

Personality:friendly ,curious,eager,and strong

Origins: (where you were born/ what clan you want to be in)

RP Sample (A short paragraph of how you would RP): Snowkit woke up, startled by the smell of smoke. she looked around the nursery for someone, but she saw no one. "HELP" snowkit cried desperately.

PM me the secret word, and you can get started!

Approved!