Ivykit's Creation! :3

Cat Name: Ivyfire(Ivykit right now)

Tom or She-Cat: She Cat

Favorite Warriors Character(s):Ivypool,Jayfeather,Ravenpaw,Graystripe,Thornclaw,Flametail and Dovewing

Familiarity with the series:Ive read all of them but only 3 of the mangas..Which is The one about Sky clan and the one with scourge and the 1st one about Ravenpaw.

Appearance: Beautiful white she cat with Silver splotchs and gray stripes in them.One white ear with 3 gray stripes and one silver patch pf fur around her right eye.

Personality:Very curious of everything.Lobes to be outside and active.

Origins:..?

RP Sample:before:"Hey guys"! Ivyfire exclaimed as she padded up to her fellow apprentices."Wanna play moss ball"?
After:"Well thats ok!"she meowed kindly but sort of dissapointed.She cheered up and said "Well im gonna go clean out the elders den,I always enjoy a good story ,see you guys laer"she meowed,smiled and walked twords the elders den.


I fixed it :D

lobes?

Whats that? Oh i meant to say loves...typo :P

I think she meant to write 'Loves', Flame. xD
Anyways, that's good! But by 'Familiarty to the Series' we mean how many books you've read, etc.
And also, RPing is a bit more like a story, like if I were to edit your's, it would be kinda like this-

Before: Hey guys whats up?Wanna go play moss ball outside..Thats ok if you dont! Ill go visit the elders...im sure they need their bedding cleaned! See yea later ! :)

After: "Hey guys whats up?" Ivypaw asked as she trotted up to her fellow apprentices. "Wanna go play moss ball outside? That's okay if you don't want to...! I'll go visit the elders..." She suggested. "I'm sure they need their bedding cleaned! See you later!" Ivypaw smiled and headed off.

You get it? Something like that.

Thanks and yea i fixed it :P

This is pretty much approved, but remember that as an apprentice, your name will be Ivypaw, not Ivyfire ;)

Approved!!

Yea... Im a crappy multi tasker as you can tell :3