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Thistle (Angel)
Clan/Rank : T:WC Kit R:TC Kit S:SC Kit Number of posts : 2040 Age : 24
| Subject: The dark light that absorbs you... Fri 16 Sep 2011 - 13:59 | |
| Wind blows on cold nights Clouds fog over the moon, blocking out all light Rain drops crashing down Your face turning into a frown.
A dark jungle, lurching with fright The creatures lurking, ready to bite From in the mist you see a faint light Unearthy and cold, oh so bright.
It pulls you closer, willing you “Come, discover magic is true!” The wind whispers into your ear “Come, come to me near!”
Your steps echo through the dark As the light begins to spark Your close now, almost close enough to touch The light now comes into your clutch.
It grows bigger than you And it keeps growing too You can run away But you’ll never see another day.
As the light reveals all You begin to tumble and fall The light consumes you and your mind To death you’re confined.
How you died, no one will ever know Except that one who survived deaths grow…
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan Number of posts : 1488 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Fri 16 Sep 2011 - 14:45 | |
| Awesome!!!!
I can make them too!
Light sweeping, lures you close, Your body hangs at the end of a rope. The noose around your neck tightens, There is no hope. |
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Thistle (Angel)
Clan/Rank : T:WC Kit R:TC Kit S:SC Kit Number of posts : 2040 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Fri 16 Sep 2011 - 15:13 | |
| As you kick the chair away Noticing there'll never be another day You fall, neck starined As your air is drained.
Your face turns blue As this happens to you Filled with a sense of dread And now you're dead.
I took over your poem! You're good! And thanks! ______________________________________ |
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan Number of posts : 1488 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Fri 16 Sep 2011 - 16:48 | |
| The light fills the air, Who is that? God is waiting for you there. 'Follow me,'
Lets continue it! |
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Thistle (Angel)
Clan/Rank : T:WC Kit R:TC Kit S:SC Kit Number of posts : 2040 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Sat 17 Sep 2011 - 2:49 | |
| Mmkay!
As the light becomes blinding, you look to see The Lord is he Then with a clap of thunder and a flash of lightning It all becomes so frightning. ______________________________________ |
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan Number of posts : 1488 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Sat 17 Sep 2011 - 4:43 | |
| nice!
The light fades, Leaving you blind The fog, Chills your behind |
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Mossy
Number of posts : 5271 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Sat 17 Sep 2011 - 6:00 | |
| Behind XD
When the fog clears You see a deer As it runs Men fire their guns ______________________________________ |
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan Number of posts : 1488 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Sat 17 Sep 2011 - 6:40 | |
| Moss, this isa man DIEING. Deer?! |
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Mossy
Number of posts : 5271 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Sat 17 Sep 2011 - 8:33 | |
| Yes,a man means Deer
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Flame
Clan/Rank : Warrior of RiverClan Number of posts : 1488 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Sun 18 Sep 2011 - 4:55 | |
| I really don't understand that. It's a man being hanged and is with god! |
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Mossy
Number of posts : 5271 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: The dark light that absorbs you... Sun 18 Sep 2011 - 5:36 | |
| Deer=man=Devil THE DEVIL WAS ONCE IN HEAVEN YA' KNOW ______________________________________ |
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